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Yes, he managed to do so, if irc I should have put that they managed to take down all the targets until one small town,
It's the early chapters so of course the system will intrude a lot, and you only read up to 2 chapters before giving this review, I take the criticism but really? Only in 2 chapters and you just divide to give a 1 star review? The reason because a system keeps intruding when it was designed lie that because it's in the early chapters, and some game names and some jokes could destroy your immersion? Explain how, maybe I can understand the joke but the game name really? How do you expect the name to be then if you don't like it
I don't see how this broke the immersion, because it have a game name?
Lol Np, and to answer your question yes I do some research, the three kingdom era of course the main one, and some of the Korean Kingdoms histories, as for Japan I haven't touched it yet but maybe next it will be them. As for headache or not, yes it definitely cause some of it Lol
Ah I see, well I hope that you can give it a chance to continue reading! It's not an easy decision to had Lu Bu death, but after considering many factors specially his personality which could change because of Lu Lingqi having a relationship with Lie Fan, but for me his cons are higher than his pros as an writer, but of course I understand why you feel that way!