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Boddu

Boddu

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2018-03-18 BeigetretenIndia
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  • Boddu
    Boddu4 years ago
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    author.... a small suggestion the story line is developing smoothly. but i think you should already start the first gathering of the harem when they are fewer women. if you do that later it would be too big of a jump and transition wouldn't be smooth