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Hehe, what a nice statement. As if your mother who gave birth of you and the girl friend who went into a coma for you are all inferior trash because we are women :D

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I'll be waiting for it~ hehe :3

It's okay, do yout best in writting :)

Btw if you need any refference or inspiration, you can read some of the iconic quick transmigration seme male protagonist novel such as don't be a kept man, beloved husband, and this quick transmigration is a little sweet. ^_^

Chille, instead of using caps for system dialogue, you should use [ dialogue ] Because reading the caps makes me imagine the system voice screaming at me. But when i see the reaction of the mc, i know it's not. Also, the name se Yun should be used as Se Yun. Because the front name se without caps in front is kind of weird. You should also pay attention to spaces between each sentence after each dot and coma. Good luck in writtig :)

Idk, i just kinda get angry halfway through the story. I hate the perverted mule. I want to kill it and destroy it to a hundred of pieces. Its a shame that i'm gonna drop this precious gold just because of one character, but i just cant take it ,_, i rlly want to chop the mule to pieces from the point of view of a female. i rlly wish for it to be grinded into dust!

which leg? :v