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I dropped the fanfic on the first five chapters, the translation and editing is done terribly. The MC is making mistakes wherever he goes, wearing disguise and forgetting he has the power to be invisible, showing his face the first time he goes out as of vigilante and immediately after telling someone his true name while begging her to not tell his secret, etc... Let's just say I lost interest very fast.
Started great but went downhill from there very fast. The MC act with little to no logic in his actions and I honestly had to greet my teeth every time he is making another stupid decision that's frustrated me to no end. If this novel was bad I wouldn't be so mad but it's actually good and that's what frustrated me more.
This is one of those novels where the author doesn't just focus on the MC, but also on the side characters. And I don't like it. Maybe if the other characters were interesting or something but they are honestly not. I liked how at the beginning the MC was using his system to get stronger and evolve, why would I want to read about the experience of side characters and what they are doing? So I simply skipped those chapters. Unfortunately things got worse as the MC started to receive rewards from his own system to give to his students so they can get stronger, and that's for me was the most stupidest thing. Why nerf your own MC and empower side characters???? Overall, the feeling I received from this novel is that it focuses way too much on slice of life instead of cultivation, also too much cheap comedy in my opinion.(His own disciple doesn't talk to him with respect too) And the slow pace of progress was so agonizing I literally skipped chapters just to move on with the plot.. I would say this here is someone Western trying to copy the writing style of Eastern cultivation novels and he wasn't successful at all... Honestly the only good things in this novel is the fact the world building was done excellently and logically and the grammar was without any mistakes that I could find.