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It kind of grew over time. I've always thought a lot about NPCs in games and how weird it would be if my life suddenly became a game. Glad you are enjoying it!

Thanks for pointing that out, I think when I was going back and editing a bunch of chapters I reposted the same edit twice. Should be fixed now

Cute and energetic story! I wasn’t sure about all the emojis In the writing at first, but I think it’s a fun unique way of writing. It adds a unique aesthetic. There are some grammar issues and switches between past and present tense, but overall its easily readable. The MC has a strong personality and is a joy to read. Looking forward to more!

I'm loving the mental games going on between the different characters. Kind of reminds me of Twelve Angry Men (being stuck in one room and trying to reach a consensus) and Death Parade (random people being forced to play a game with limited memories). Fun to read so far. Just a few grammatical mistakes, but it overall reads well and gets the suspense right. Introducing so many characters can be difficult, but even with just 3 chapters, I have a good feeling about each of them. Looking forward to more and figuring out who the killer is!

Cool prologue and interesting start. The dialogue is fun and helps flesh out the characters. I haven't read many novels that intentionally switch between third person and third person, which is interesting. It feels like the author has fleshed out a lot of the story so I'm interested to read more! The grammar is a little rough. There's some switches between past tense and present tense, but overall it is easily readable. Looking forward to reading more chapters!

Nice mysterious beginning! I like how the world is slowly coming together with more background and explanation as we go on. All the dialogue between Aries and Heru is great. Chapters are a little short, but so many have been released it makes up for it! Looking forward to reading more!

Friend or foe? Seems like a friend! I'm interested to see what this cursemark is about

Interesting way to get lunch!

[Not too many spoilers, but I put the tag just in case since I comment on things that happen later in the story] Interesting story and magic system! The first two chapters act as a prologue to set up the world and then the story moves quickly from there. The MC is introduced well, although a bit similar to others in this genre. It's a little early to judge the secondary characters. Overall the writing/grammar is good but could use a little cleaning. A few sentences are difficult to read and could be rephrased. I appreciate the creative use of [brackets] to show what should be italicized inner monologue. Webnovel needs to allow italics. I can sense the author has put a lot of thought into the magic system of this world and is slowly introducing parts of it. The mystery behind the system in the MC's head is also intriguing. Looking forward to more!