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Sage_Kong

Sage_Kong

Lv11
2018-03-08 BeigetretenPhilippines
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  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong9mth
    Kommentiert

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Transmigration (1)
    Level Up in Martial World
    Ost · Aurelius_Imperator
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong9mth
    Verschickt

    Other than the rate of updates haha which I truly understand, creativity/art is not something to be rushed. Everything is great. Very impressive writing. a masterpiece in the making, I said it first! haha kudos

    Monster’s Reprieve - Live Another Day
    Fantasie · NUM291
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong9mth
    Kommentiert

    sweet

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
    Monster’s Reprieve - Live Another Day
    Fantasie · NUM291
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong9mth
    Kommentiert

    lol

    The commander smiled and said, "First one to die buys dinner?"
    Monster’s Reprieve - Live Another Day
    Fantasie · NUM291
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong9mth
    Kommentiert

    *was someone

    They were bewildered by this behavior. The man in front of them had never shown even the slightest sign of weakness. He was someone inhuman, but here he was planning to fight an army alone.
    Monster’s Reprieve - Live Another Day
    Fantasie · NUM291
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong9mth
    Kommentiert

    *remaining

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
    Monster’s Reprieve - Live Another Day
    Fantasie · NUM291
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong9mth
    Kommentiert

    You could've squeezed details for every chapters. It feels generic, and its like walking-through a series of situations to be undertaken. Its more like a story of two detective's with their hunches.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Echoes of Doubt
    Cruel Charisma
    Horror · NebulaNoctis
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong9mth
    Verschickt

    Ive read up to the 3rd chapter, and I was expecting a detailed writing, since it is a Horror/Thriller Novel. And I think the chapters should be squeezed as much as 2000 words the least, for the genre. The chapter conveys details they uncovered but doesn't let the readers hold the weight of that information. Anyways, kudos and hope to find an improved writing :)

    Cruel Charisma
    Horror · NebulaNoctis
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Kommentiert

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Beginning
    A Transmigrator's Journey To Another World
    Fantasie · IvanelaSalove
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Antwortet auf IvanelaSalove

    Thank youuuu Ivanela!

    Ch 1 The Notorious Prince Neebo
    From Here to Eternity
    Ost · Sage_Kong
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Antwortet auf NUM291

    Thank you NUM291 🫡 I truly appreciate the review. I hope you could read it someday when its done :) God bless

    From Here to Eternity
    Ost · Sage_Kong
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Antwortet auf NUM291

    many thanks 🙏

    Ch 4 A Crude Crown
    From Here to Eternity
    Ost · Sage_Kong
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Antwortet auf GegeSadewa

    Would you read my latest novel? :)

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Point of Origin
    Emperor Fate
    Ost · Sage_Kong
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Antwortet auf Faceless

    Would you read my latest novel? :)

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Resurrection
    Emperor Fate
    Ost · Sage_Kong
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Antwortet auf araf

    Would you read my latest novel? :)

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Resurrection
    Emperor Fate
    Ost · Sage_Kong
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Antwortet auf NUM291

    Would you read my latest novel? :)

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Resurrection
    Emperor Fate
    Ost · Sage_Kong
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Kommentiert

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Beginning
    A Transmigrator's Journey To Another World
    Fantasie · IvanelaSalove
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Kommentiert

    😂

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Antwortet auf Violet_Peaches

    Thank you, i have revised the description on it. Cultivating Dao Pillars was meant for the 2nd stage.

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
    From Here to Eternity
    Ost · Sage_Kong
    detail
  • Sage_Kong
    Sage_Kong10mth
    Kommentiert

    Thank you for the Chapter!

    Ch 15 Gorge
    Worldshift A New Beginning.
    Fantasie · Crown_Nyx
    detail