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Also, because of how bad trying to fight Anakin went, Purity and one other escaped, then there's Kayser who didn't fight and Night and Fog, who faced Anakin on an earlier fight, but managed to retreat.

Kaiser wasn't there, Hookwolf was defeated early on, he tried to jump Anakin, but Anakin just grabbed him midair, crushed his wolf shape into a ball and then used him as a projectile against one of the Giant twins.

Haven't posted it yet

I mean, the battle started and Anakin imediately used force speed to try and flee, Everything was moving at the speeds of a speeding car.

Ugh, ended up being 3 days, sorry about that

Finishing it soon, give me a day or two.

Nevermind, going into the chapter editor it was messed but, see if it's fixed now

What? But it looks just fine on the browser and mobile when I check?

I actually share some of those feelings, I don't really enjoy reading a story where this plot point keeps coming up and, usually, heavily prefer when the MC never reveals it. I wasn't planning on revealing her past life, or even mentioning it too often in this fic because, despite her rebirth, she IS Kara Zor-El... far more than she is her past self. Unfortunately, I'm also a discovery writer and, as I was writing this chapter (and a few before it) things naturally progressed towards this point. I could, with a lot of work, write this out of the story, but it just felt like something THIS Kara would worry about and coming out something she would do, an evolution of her mental state. . Still... I completely understand your frustration.

Yeah... the story starts great, it's a fanfic where the MC is a Mary Sue, so of course she's gonna be gifted at pretty much everything, from archery to martial arts, to business management and engineering, but at least they have a reason for it, it's not the greatest reason, but it can work. Also, she does take 6 months of training at the beginning and only becomes a match for catwoman, Batman can still beat her, which is more time than many such fanfics can say about their MC's. So, all in all, about 40 or 50 enjoyable chapters, not the greatest thing in the world, but good. Then we get to the Gotham arc and things change. EVERY, SINGLE. CHARACTER, seems to be fighting to hold the idiot ball. The author wanted the MC to solve problems so, every time there's a problem, no mater what, the MC is the one that will solve it, no matter where she, how long it takes, or how stupid the other characters have to be for her to solve. THe story tries to use humor to mask everyone's incompetency around the MC, but it doesn't land very well with me. People being stupid once or twice so the MC can look good I can stand, doing it every single chapter for more than 50 chapters is a little too much. In short, the MC is the greatest, she's a prodigy in anithing she tries and, to make her look good, whenever people are around her, their skills and IQ go down by 50% or more... it's almost like she has a debuff aura or something.