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Mr. Author...there is a typo about his physique....it states:480...I think it may be 4800...which is still weird considering his body cultivation technique and his body being reformed from the liquid and he'll fire and divine spark to a certain extent.

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I think its missing 2 chapters...unless u added a glossary or index? lol

Dear Arkinslive, I saw that you asked the question as to why so many people skip through ordeals. If I may...and this is a personal opinion. I for one have been reading your story since the first day it was introduced on webnovel and I was instantly attracted to your writing style, character building, world settings, etc,etc... as such, I feel like its a drawback to writing such a great novel; alot of readers have became heavily invested in the development of Jake, although I know you've written and founded concepts involving Ruby...its somewhat hard watching Jake have to go through unfounded danger without any idea as to why, with the struggle from when he was first introduced to where he is now, it sometime comes as Ruby being a negative or a roadblock he must overcome over and over without any seen benefits. Now I will admit I do purchase the extra chapter perk every month but at times like these where some skip over chapters, I will wait til you've fully built up the ordeal so I'm not left in suspense and I'm able to read from beginning to end. Personally Ruby doesn't bother me much, I mostly enjoy reading about how Jake is evolving during each ordeal, how the faction is evolving and also curious about if their will be any territory/kingdom building within the faction and when or if Jake will become the sovereign he's destined to be, with that said with ordeals like this, its more about the anxiety or the possible hindrance to his growth that existences like Ruby may cause so I prefer to wait to pull the bandage off at one time to see how everything works out.

Mr. Author will you be continuing this novel on webnovel as of now?

Whats going on? Why can't I drop my Golden tickets on this story? I have a good 20....Webnovel our author needs motivation 🤬

Can a person be too good at his craft? I'm starting to think Lumydee has it set out to bankrupt me (my poor coins)...Even after I told myself, I wasn't going to read it, the temptation was too strong, luckily it seems he is vacation this week (hopefully), it gives me time to save up, lol. This novel like all his other novels are addictive, so reader beware!!! Once you start thus novel, you will be hooked. Enough of the chit-chat, I need to get back to King of Technology, hopefully that can tide me over long enough for him to update the rest 😔

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I usually don't leave reviews, although I like pretty much any kingdom building/sect building novel, this is getting truly hard to read even with skipping and replacing, the last month the grammar has gotten drastically worst, I really recommend hiring a proof reader if your going to continue to charge per chapter until then I may have to drop this one until further notice.

Wait a minute, Author please take a look at this chapter. I generally try to read between the lines, but this chapter literally seemed to have illegible characters in it. It is in dire need of editing.