CanadianTick

I felt it was information that should have been told in the story itself. Author's notes mid-story always break the rhythm.

This author's note shouldn't be here, and that information should be told narratively.

You interrupt your own story way too often with your author's notes. Good luck.

Judging from the grammar, I can only assume English is a second or third language. Good luck with your story!

Nice copypasta.

How does he not notice a giant dude running at him while inside a room with them?

So much cringe.

I mean, even in canon chakra isn't something native to the humans of Naruto. It was first spread by Hagoromo. Sure, pretty much everyone has it by the time the story takes place, given however many generations later, but the point remains that "no chakra" was the natural state and it isn't a stretch that the occasional person wouldn't inherit the magic juice.

This kind of anomaly is EXACTLY the type of thing a soldier would tell his superior. Especially given that Minato doesn't know what "it" was, and it's in their village.

Hopefully the longer time between updates will result in a higher quality.