What could have happened: In 200 chapters, the protagonist could have easily formed a harem with at least a hundred women, cultivated up to the empyrean realm, killed all enemies, and had some leisure time before going to the next map. What happened: The protagonist dragged on dozens of chapters to have sex with one woman or another for absolutely no reason, let enemies escape only for them to come back and cause more problems, and still behaves arrogantly instead of using his brain. MC: 'I can see you naked and do various things with your body, but I won't take your virginity because I want to be stronger.' MC: 'Doing everything except sex is acceptable because I don't know you well enough.'" wasted too many coins os this shit.

Positive points: Fast progress The protagonist quickly adapts to the situation and it doesn't take hundreds of chapters. The R-18 scenes are good and not too detailed or boring. Negative points: Although there is a time skip, I can't help but feel that everything still seems too childish and it would require hundreds or thousands of years of time skip. It doesn't make sense for the protagonist to be the sin of lust and only have a few wives and not have sex with anyone else, especially since the wives can decide with whom he has sex. This is just a beta protagonist from Japan. Personally, I don't like childishness, and adding a child who only throws tantrums and doesn't show any gratitude or courtesy towards the protagonist is unnecessary. The reality of the child and her mother before the protagonist was one of 100% humiliation and death, and yet I have to read about a retarded child who doesn't feel gratitude or respect for anything and throws tantrums when she doesn't get what she wants.

MC ( ) no brain ( ) trash ( ) barely out of trash level (x) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... HAREM ( ) no brain ( ) trash ( ) barely out of trash level (x) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Writing Quality ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Stability of Updates ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Story Development ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Character Design ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... World Background ( ) no brain ( ) trash (x) barely out of trash level ( ) it's ok ( ) better than this is hard ( ) not possible ( ) how is that possible? ( ) reverend insanity ( ) wtf... Obs : It seems that one of the characters was forgotten by the author. ( Ai Fang from the Yang-Yin sect)

I wasted my time reading 59 chapters... probably one of the worst novels I've had the displeasure of reading. in short: the protagonist who appears in the first chapter is totally different from the one who appears in the following chapters and to make the things worse his decisions become increasingly stupid and without logical sense.

This novel has several problems and most of them come from the fact that the protagonist keeps the memories of the past life. after reading about 200 chapters I can say that the author has no idea what he was doing and seems to have gotten lost. the fact that the protagonist has the memories of his past life, did nothing but make him weaker mentally and a person who seems to be bound by the laws and cultures of his past life, I didn't see any benefits from having the memories of the previous life. and that only made him pathetic. all this just to spend hundreds of chapters for "evolution" of the protagonist.

thanks for the review. I certainly won't waste my time with this novel.

yes I understand that you are new and still learning, but think about the following situation, do you really think that the moral values ​​here on earth are the same as those on other planets? even if it's the same race it doesn't make sense, because the situation they live in is totally different from ours, their story is also different, so how can it be the same? calling the mc beta is because the mc can seduce women without doing anything just for the pheromones, but still act like a child, the only thing i expect from the mc who spent so much time in the forest surviving is that he act mature .

I don't doubt that something like : you must marry my disciple to pay your father's debt. quite possible that it happens.

I really wish the author had chosen the patr... instead of signing with the webnovel , because they limit the novel a lot in many things. as I said in my Review, this novel is good and consistent, but these cliche things like dueling or social status, it really sucks and just do what other thousands of novels already do. and as the novel has a harem in the tag , I hope the author chooses the members wisely , this crazy woman who wants to duel with him , just because of something so stupid ... characters like that better avoid because they only bring problems.

about the sister was a flashback? it was very difficult to understand... and what exactly happened to the sister?

the only bad thing so far is having too few chapters 😔

That's why this city only has 3 rank A's, instead of continuing to feed these children's illusion that the world is a beautiful place and being mediocre is okay, they could break this illusion and show them that it's better to give 100% or one day even death won't erase the regret of not being able to protect oneself.

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I love to read apocalypse novel and with a system like that... but i must say this novel is mediocre and cliche. first you have that stereotype of chinese names that are annoying to remember, then of course there come those ''her beauty could bring down empires''. a bunch of retards who seem to have never seen a woman and the author is not tired of describing one beauty after another... but if all that wasn't enough, you have a copy or a great coincidence of a novel which for many should not be a mystery. and finally you will read 100 chapters without any progress. let's be honest the protagonist could have left this place a long time ago but he didn't because? I'm sure you'll find a lot of excuses. but if all that i said wasn't enough then we have a protagonist with a weak mentality, where he acts like it's the end of the world if his family died.

Warlock of the magia world

(1)R-18 for 100 Ch?

The best part of this novel was when I stopped reading and deleted this novel of my library.................................................

do you like wmw? reverend insanity? The legendary mechanic? then Just read this novel.….......................... ....... . ....... ....

why not read this novel: the protagonist is a simp trash, you will constantly have to read descriptions of useless and unimportant women, where the protagonist will make some stupid decision just because according to the author's logic '' no man can't control himself around a woman and acts like an excited dog'' and then there will be something like '' the protagonist doesn't know why he acted like that, and now all that remains is to get out of this situation ''. sometimes the protagonist seems to be intelligent and make rational decisions, sometimes he is stupid and ignorant and does not seem to have the ability to use the brain, sincerely this novel and practically 99% of the novels gives the impression that if not all, the cultivators are retarded and unable to think rationally. over and over and over again the protagonist makes stupid decisions, because of women, if he were to follow logic, he would have surely died by now, this is by far one of the worst protagonists I have ever had the displeasure to know, if it is with a woman, he acts leniently.