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Makes up the powers of tactile telekinesis as they go along, chapters have terrible grammar, story progresses like sh!t.
Change “my” with “his”
He walked ahead to open the door. Pushing it, he found the door wouldn’t even budge. ‘It seems just pushing it won’t do.’ Eric observed.
Spacing needs to be looked at
Be quit
You need artificial limbs to be a weapon shifter
Drive knights shapeshifting box (one punchman)
That’ not an odachi
Owls are not slow