Daoist_Wakanda

Sigh

How convenient 😀

Humble brag

:)

Awesome! Thanks for writing!

Fair 😅😂😂😂

TL;DR : I'm too annoyed to even do a full review on this one. Thanks to author/TL team for making me cry. writing (5/5): good grammar, interesting dialogue, I love the way idioms are expressed. story (3/5): interesting premise, pacing was a little on the fast side but it was still good. technical elements were there (foreshadowing etc.) BUT the sudden forced plot armour 30ish chapters in killed the whole thing for me. unable to continue. characters (4/5): good, interesting, few small inconsistencies but acceptable . updates (2/5): for the standard of WN, at the time of writing, 1ch a week is not high. that being said for new readers there are many chapters to binge on. worldbuilding (3/5): good until chapter 30 when author disregards his own power system and plot armours his way to a solution that never needed to be there in the first place - yes I'm annoyed lol, its so hard to find a novel tthats interesting and has this level of english on WN

because plot armour and it fuxks me off so badly because this story was shaping up to be a good one. but from here on out I cant get over this and how theyre gonna use this to power level MC. it was so unnecessary which is all the more annoying - why dont you just say god came down and gave him some cheat codes ⬆️↙️⬇️↘️↕️ sigh

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