Yeshwanth90

Good start, I have read one of you previous works of pokemon fanfic it’s really good , I really enjoyed reading your work

The novel turned dark real quick, good fanfic enjoyed reading it

The Fanfic is really good and just a suggestion , please end the flash backs in 2 chapters at most dragging it won’t help the story at all

Just some feedback for author: The backstory is taking too long and any reader would loose interest if backstories aren’t brief , I really like the fanfic but in the near future can you please try keep it simple.

Good novel but didn’t have a standard release rate

No point in keeping him around

Yep looks like a machine translated

Thanks for the chapter , hope you can continue writing

Looking forward to your next chapters

Wow literally a copy and paste , to be frank it’s terrible and needs a lot of editing or a rewrite