WickedQueen2

Thanks for reading!!! If you see any mistakes be sure to mention it.

I know it really doesn't matter but Artorias fought the abyss when it first appeared in Oolacile which became Farron and they used to travel from land to land fighting against the abyss until they themselves were affected.

I will preface this with saying, I want to give this a lower rating, I can't sadly because it's only one aspect that I dislike though it's arguably the most important. I am on chapter 35 now, I don't think I'll be continuing sadly because of a single thing. the MC has revealed meta knowledge, only marginally at this point but it's enough. I'll admit I mostly just hate Danzo and the root and it's clear they're gonna be important continuing forward so I'll be leaving early.Regardless of my distaste for Danzo I have an even bigger issue with the system and the far too many critical downsides.First, it takes too long between simulations, I can sort of understand this one but it's still annoying.Second and likely my biggest issue with this system, the system is limiting him in such a way that he can't use it for anything but getting simulation points as he needs them to get his natural capabilities back, most significantly with his learning abilities being hindered immensely.if everything else wasn't better by such a significant margin this story would have run into the ground on the disappointment of a system long ago.if I do come back to this and i find it better than I expected it to become i will update this review but so far i am disappointed.

Those are literally the games I've played recently and in the correct order as well, that's hilarious.

it's a shame you've decided to stop, but I understand completely. Enjoy your break from writing and do something fun. I hope you return to this in the future as this is a great story with a lot of potential. Be proud and come back stronger!!!

Thanks for the feedback, I'm actually working on the next draft of the book now, sadly I won't be uploading it as in the past my work was stolen and sold on Amazon. Thank you for the support and I'll be sure to take what you've said into consideration while I continue working on it!!!

half dwarf and half elf.

Focus on yourself when you need/want, it's your life and your book, we're just the lucky ones who get to read what you write. on another note I've been enjoying the recent chapters a lot, keep up the good work!!!

You would think that I defaulted to 5 stars but I actually tried to nitpick it. I love the character the most I think, his personality is well written and I just can't get enough of him. The writing quality is top notch, I think I spotted a few minor mistakes but nothing to complain about. The story development speaks for itself. Update stability is solid, my only wish is that there where more chapters. Finally the world background is astoundingly well done, most don't bother going as in depth on the world background early on, others tend to info dump towards the middle of the story when it suddenly becomes relevant so I'm considerably impressed. My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.

I've enjoyed this arc so far but it's your story and I can see what you mean, I found myself doing the same in my book towards the end glad you saw this in yours and decided to fix it. Your book, Your rules.