Maokami

Holy shit. I just saw this again and while yes, I understand everyone has what their interested in. The main issue I have with harem and this just is all around. Is the fact most good stories end up devolving into it and the writer starts to give up since they wrote so many useless characters. Or when they are a fanfic and they have to used the name a random number amount of women they say this giga ultra divine god Omni lord god of creation Chad has to marry and love him. It’s dumb and retarded At this point. Look at any fanfics on here and tell me it doesn’t just end up with the dude becoming god or starting off fixing stuff they have no right to even know how to fix. Tell me you haven’t seen a story where the mc walks in. Women drop their panties because he’s so much better then x or Y and he suddenly goes on to fix every little thing with no idea on how to do it or he is suddenly blessed with idec thing. It’s tired and over the hell used.

Yeah, bro you didn’t cook.. It’s kinda spoiled now. And the fact you kept going with it either says you panicked and didn’t know what to do now. Or you’re writing for yourself which I’m find with.

The AI it’s noticeable as hell

You haven’t read or seen black clover have ya

Okay, I like it but you are straight up turning it into Ben 10in the marvel universe. Kevin, Gwen, Manny I understand great characters. But take a page from dial. You do not need them. Instead have him makes friends with people who are close but not close to their powers if you want to make it seem like team 10.

Yes

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So umm, Yeah I’ve read this before on either Spacebattle Or sufficent…