Daoist_Storm

This no memory of original host thing is really annoying especially when they catch the MC acting out of character and the McDonald’s is surprised to be found out.

Author San this image makes your novel feel tedious to read your sense of MC aesthetics is abysmal. Please input the Mac decription in ChatGPT to generate a handsome version for you 🙏🏾😆😆😆

Any time western stories fanfics have the Chinese culture flavor it tends to feel off. Castle is around 35 to 40years old what’s with the next generation nonsense?

In the series castle got her a role so she would not move to New York

15? That shutout be during the shippuden arc. They are nowhere near that. Not even at chin in exams yet they are 15? The by force romance is messing up you timeline 😒😞

How is it cheating? Sexual fidelity on the part of the man should never be a criteria for cheating.

This book is really good but the whole part where Ino is deeply involved with the MC is starting to feel off. Even Hinata should in my Opinion should have just reach a level of training under the MC to change enough to satisfy her father and leave from under his teaching without them knowing his “movements” till the time he truly displays his true strength. But it not my story and I’m just giving my opinion 🙏🏾

Doctor?

Stethoscope? Seriously?

It’s good but the MC is getting nervous around the women too much After the first successful mission he should have lost the deer in the headlights mode. Or is he a born simp?