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Not that great. He has a system that can grant him anything without effort. Instead of incremental progress or struggling to make money with various schemes he wins an absurd bet, writes 1 book, and robs root once. He doesn't even take time to plan out a comprehensive set of powers or assign different powers to cover his identity. The story is basically over at that point, just a typical gary stu with overwhelming power and foreknowledge. Personally I would have invested in fuinjutsu + shadow clone which could basically print money and plan out a comprehensive set of powers to work towards prioritizing speed > attack > defense to work towards. An alternative approach would have been to specialize in stealth and steeling to collect wealth overtime with an alternative identity.

Pure VRMMORPGs have very low stakes, making most actions meaningless in terms of actual power progression. At best they can make some real money by selling items and find a few friends.

Ino says she is earth and that she counters Hinata's lightning. This is backwards, in Naruto at least.

The system is too OP. Would have been better if he gets a single random jutsu, stat, or % towards each release type for a small boost from each corpse. Why does it arbitrarily allow him to skip hand-signs without having to do any training to master/perfect each jutsu. The jutsu creation system is ridiculous, seemingly able to do anything without clearly defined limits or caveats. For example if it was limited to combining jutsu components for jutsu he already knows it would be less OP. MC is very arrogant and goes about things in a super obvious manner. He simultaneously doesn't care about the village allowing normal cannon plots while willing to desert yet expose himself to arbitrarily help the village without any reason/goal in mind. Why did he break out of prison instead of simply leaving a clone behind and using earth escape? The MC should have simply learned/created jutsu to help him in his primary means of gaining power, staying in contact with corpses while undetected. He could have infiltrated the various hidden villages and farmed skills without causing any stir or worked as an undertaker.

As someone who enjoyed the original novel the cheat came from I think this fanfic is great. So far it doesn't seem like a necessity to have read the original to enjoy this one either but decently worth checking out if you haven't already read it.

Series was renamed to "King Eye" but was originally called "King of Gods".

Seems like a bust to me. You created an isekai summoning story but almost immediately do a time-skip instead of any world building or power exploration and go on and on with meaningless conversations. The most interesting part of these kind of stories is the progression through learning about the system/skills/magic and world building and it is seemly absent all together from the start of the story.

If you received a fishing class would you immediately give up on leveling your class skills? After catching a normal fish in an ordinary zone would you extrapolate that since it was ordinary the one time you tried it would therefore always be ordinary. Even if ordinary fish were the best drop in an ordinary zone, wouldn't it still make sense to level up your skills for when you do have to cast in a special area? If the fishing pole can increase quality then logically any ordinary fish would gain a special quality to it which can be sold or eaten to help in some manner. It is a system novel with skills and stats except he neither has to grind his skills and the ability he gained is extraneous to the system without any reliance on his stats. It is completely irrational and badly written.

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This is a very flawed novel. There is no explanation for this kid possessing high school knowledge in elementary school as his success has nothing to do with him being a genius or doing any kind of hard work but is the result of his system cheat. His system doesn't even help him in obtaining such knowledge so this is just wish fulfillment by the author. This isn't really a system novel in the first place as there is no buildup or interaction around it, it is just used as an excuse for him to know all investment outcomes beforehand. The MC doesn't even attempt to hide his cheat ability and does so in as high profile manner as possible, taking interviews and doing it in front of an audience. Winning the lottery 8 out of 10 times makes his foreknowledge a statistical certainty whereas winning once for a large amount would at least give a plausible deniability of being lucky. Touring an investment company makes no sense as even entertaining the idea of being an employee, making money for other people is incredibly dumb. Betting millions of dollars with a minor through only verbal contract is perfectly normal behavior.