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Supreme_Leader

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Everything is Aladeen

2017-10-14 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader1h
    Antwortet auf SonoBello

    Themselves is right cause, the Dragon Warrior could be a female or a male.

    "All we can do is resume our training and trust that in time, the real Dragon Warrior will reveal themselves." Shifu said and pushed open the door to the training ground.
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader2h
    Kommentiert

    Fast five

    The five people were known as the Furious Five. 
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Filme · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader2h
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    The interactions are pretty bad. And the way the MC "acquires" these girls is even worse most chinese harem novels. Harem done well is fun to read. But done like this, it's one of the things that ruin a story.

    Ch 17 RYAN AND LILY
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader2h
    Antwortet auf Miami_XM

    When was the grammar and writing quality ever good?

    Ch 15 THE PERFECT NECROMANCY
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader3h
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    What if he created a child with her and transferred his soul into it?

    "Madam, when will you get it?" He leaned closer until their faces were an inch apart and he could feel her soft, fragrant breath caressing him. "I would propose to you a thousand times a day, until you say 'yes.' Madam, no matter what happens in our life, just know that... I want you to be part of it. Madam, I fell for you hard... I guess... no, I don't really need a reason to fall in love with you... I love you, my Madam, not because you are beautiful, or maybe because you make wonderful drinks. Maybe you are just beautiful with a kind heart. Or maybe it's your innocent nature..."
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader3h
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    The interactions between the MC and Madam Puddifoot are a bit cringe. Especially with a grown ąss woman acting like an anime character. Some things that look cute in animation form don't really work all that well in live action or in text format. One of the reasons why Live action adaptations of Anime fail all the time. It would have been better if they flirted like real humans and acted their age as well. If you have a hard time writing such scenes just copy one from a Streaming or TV show.

    Ch 10 SPELL TESTING
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader3h
    Antwortet auf lick_ma_balls

    Haha 😂

    Ryan shrugged his shoulders nonchalantly, "I wanted to invite you over for dinner. But if you are busy, I can underst..."
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader3h
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    *preferred

    "Yes. As you can see, everyone loves this place now!" Madam Puddifoot replied enthusiastically. She grabbed a cup and poured some lavender tea, just like he loved it.
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader3h
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    *I understand or *Understood

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader4h
    Antwortet auf SPIRIT_KING
    4) Yuri/lesbo? [Threesomes and foursomes, so, you can take a guess.]
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader4h
    Antwortet auf Kiyoung
    4) Yuri/lesbo? [Threesomes and foursomes, so, you can take a guess.]
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader4h
    Antwortet auf Na1gel
    4) Yuri/lesbo? [Threesomes and foursomes, so, you can take a guess.]
    Harry Potter: Necromancer's Legacy
    Bücher und Literatur · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader4h
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    'Again with the specialization thing...' Luke thought, not understanding what she meant.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader4h
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    How childish. He should learn from the principal to present himself with grace and talk eloquently.

    "At no time did I lie. You're bald and I'm an outcast," Luke said with a grimace. This bald guy wanted to look for trouble with him, not to blame him if he was rude.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader4h
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    How convenient...

    'I guessed as much,' thought Luke with a grimace. It was obvious that his enemies would be extreme supremacists who wanted to exterminate the normies.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader4h
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    Unethical? He sprayed sheet on innocent people. I think he above doing anything unethical at this point.

    He now had an unethical thought in his mind. Maybe he shouldn't become a mercenary and misuse his powers to get money.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader4h
    Antwortet auf bob685014

    Agreed. It's a bit too contrived.

    "I don't know what you're talking about, kid. We don't have any of those books here," said the old man shaking his head.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader4h
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    Which was an actual prank. Unlike the one the MC did.

    In the series, a group of normies do the same thing, but instead of shit they use red paint and ruin the Nevermore Academy dance.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader5h
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    Stops lying > stop lying

    "Luke stops lying... We have proof. Tom already confessed and showed several proofs to the director that you were the mastermind," said Bethany, sighing and showing him Tom's cell phone.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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  • Supreme_Leader
    Supreme_Leader5h
    Kommentiert

    Naa.

    The only bad thing was the innocent people who participated in the dance were bathed in shit. Nothing can be perfect, right? One bath and they'd be as good as new.
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    TV · Nathe07
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