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Luomaze3dKommentiertalright and the rest of the story is not worth reading because of this. Chinese authors mean garbage writing and every story has the same cliches. Atleast change it up and take the original authors work into something readable.
This is to rub the dignity of Bai Ye and his sister Unohana Retsu on the ground!- Luomaze3dKommentiert
Got this far in an already first real issue I see. The MC is being described as a captain because of this weird writing but he's not.
He is Gotei 13, Captain of the Fourth Division, and the younger brother of Unohana Retsu. - Luomaze1mthKommentiertCh 90 Chapter 87 - Noblesse Oblige: Loyalty, Duty or Morals?
- Luomaze1mthKommentiert"And then I was like, 'Bitch, what did I tell you, he wasn't good for you', but she didn't listen, did she?" Lucian said with a sigh. The girls around him started laughing, "You're so funny, Lucian," they giggled.detailPercy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the UnderworldBücher und Literatur · Shadow_D_Monarch3
- Luomaze1mthAntwortet auf SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
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[Insert picture of Shmi here] - Luomaze1mthAntwortet auf FirstHokageYomi is now my girlfriend right, should I treat her differently, I never had a girlfriend, and even is even right to have a 7-year-old girlfriend
- Luomaze1mthVerschickt
Honestly I have no idea if this novel was planned out or just making up as we go. We got someone who lived an entire life and failed tremendously. Now in a new life they continue to fail tremendously. Honestly the main character makes no logical choices and it's like why even have included the second life when it doesn't mean anything. The pacing is horrible. I don't understand why it's so weird and it continues to get worse. The promise of the "volumes" getting better when this has been a mess since the start. The overall plot is just weird and contains so much filler I just can't explain it. The system itself is one of the worst story systems I have read. Just copy everyone else because what your system is doing is just worse. You really have something going on with the world and the story could be really good. I recommend you either finish this garbage and rewrite or just scrap it now and start making changes. This story could be so good but the more I read the more frustrating it is. For those thinking about reading or others in the middle of reading. Be prepared for a frustrating and an honest waste of time. Read at your own risk.
- Luomaze2mthAntwortet auf Raistlins_Ghost1
AU my dude
The first name on her list was John. An orphan from Eridanus II with remarkable physical strength and high cognitive ability. There were others like him too - Samuel, Kelly, Linda who showed promising results as well. - Luomaze2mthVerschickt
My rating is not honest because I would rate lower but it would probably get deleted. It's really a 2 star for the story and overall the content is just dumb. Honestly most Korean stories on this site are just the main character being a servant who can't make logical choices. They get in trouble with someone in a higher position and eventually they figure stuff out. If you are here for plot it sucks. If you are here for the other reason it's alright.
- Luomaze2mthKommentiert"I'm not a resentful person; if you want to leave things here, it won't bother me later, so you don't have to worry." Damian knew he wasn't comfortable being friends with people who once wanted to harm him, but he could let go of that hatred or distrust over the years.
- Luomaze2mthKommentiert
nah it's every other week something new happens. bro you got bad luck or you got cursed
My apology for suddenly disappearing on you guys without so much as a word. Grandma died, had to do a make up for a compulsory course or risk failing it, and still searching for a new apartment. Last week was too...floozy for me, if that's an accurate word. - Luomaze2mthKommentiertI can't say for certain how long she keeps yelling and trying to finger-bang me out of existence, but eventually, she slows her assault down, before completely stopping it.
- Luomaze2mthAntwortet auf DavidNk
probably I mean it's miles spider abilities
I needed a shave or else I'd end up looking like an impoverished Afro Samurai. - Luomaze2mthKommentiertCh 168 Chapter 168: A Magnificent Creation
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Down on your knees for more Chinese stuff i see.
"Ingen Ryuki was a Chinese poet, calligrapher, and monk of Linji Chan Buddhism from China. He is best known for founding the Obaku school of Zen in Japan. He is also famous for introducing Ming Dynasty style calligraphy to this country during the Edo Period." - Luomaze2mthKommentiert"I am sorry for her rude actions." Kiyotaka apologized, but Mizuto could tell that this guy was jealous, which made him speechless.
- Luomaze2mthKommentiertWith that question, Yume knew that Mizuto had made a lot of money.
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Alright to many Chinese things . I can ignore the food but feet?
He turned and couldn't help but stare at Yume. Unlike before, she had changed her clothes to a white short-sleeved blouse tucked inside under the high-waisted gray skirt that reached her ankle. She might not wear her usual tights, but her bare feet definitely weren't bad. They were white, smooth, and cute, but he knew he couldn't stare at them for so long.