Shiridon

I am proud of you Watermelon. your like your father.

when was the cats Name dropped?

bad take. Canon ron has sonething against charity. just a reminder. and fanon rin would rather steal and spy Than accept charity.

he is the author. that alone is enough to destroy any powerscalling he wants. it is them with original stories. there is no abitary border for fanfiction. you comment hit a nerf with your ton. good day to you.

wow quiete an improvement.

I want fanfiction with Crookshanks as the villain as counterpart to this one

for me it was great.

why wants every author let their mc make their own breathing technique. your mc is still human. he should not be able to creat his own technique fast. pls atleast pls keep it useless till he truly deserves it. also no hate and thx for the chapter

from what I know that is not truly confirmed and only a theory

I will Go through all criteria this site has. Writting quality:St the Start it was bearable But it sadly degraded in later chapters. Story Development: it runs paralel to the noxian Invasion ans since there is Not much know about the Invasion I can t judge it Charakter design: its okay just nothing revolutionary. it gets worse because of the writing quality. Update stabillity: it seems stabil. World bullding: runeterra is a large and beautifull World that the author doens't always know how to utilise.