HeartRend

great chat, nice to see other perspectives

Ty for chapter!

Honestly if he does then I quit. What’s the point of becoming so much stronger than a campione if u can’t even beat anyone?

nice time skip, ty. Hopefully this doesn't devolve too much into smut, and focuses more on the plot.

Great progress and update schedule. I would say the charachter development is a little lacking, as ther personality shift of the MC is a bit fast/extreme. Still pretty good and feels good to fine a Campione fanfic with an OC main charachter - Goudo was just too beta for my liking for someone with that much power.

+1

Ugh kinda annoying how much MC is protecting or favouring Xiao Guy

Ty for chap. Hopefully he actually kills and finished the problem at once instead of letting him go just to come back again

+1