I see good grammer, some world building, and best thing of all the mc has common sense which is a rarity on this platform. I‘d like for this to be a manwha or something so i could get a better view of the world and this is an actual superhero book and not that chinese cultivation mess thats all over the platform. I give it 5 stars so give it a chance.

Can this be harem?

I can go tag that author and see if he likes what you’r saying about him. Im sure you can compete with him. In a argument.

Such a basic response to such a lack luster author the creator of i am gohan is better than you and you copied his idea thats all.

I’m not going to give you all of my stones. You’v seen 18 that bald midget doesn’t deserve her. Its not everyday I ask for anything so just this once!

Please man 🙏

Can we have the main character and android 18 make up this isn’ an 18 that gave him a hard time. He should have a baby with her the MC needs a son. Don’t let Krillin have her!

Thank you for the chapter daddy

Please update more frequently and you will get all of my stones. I’m speaking for everyone in here when I say that. You just got knocked off the leaderboard for being inconsistent author.

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This is one of the best fanfics on this site. Trunks feels like an actual guy tossed into dbz and not someone unnatural or trying too hard to fit in. I really hope this doesn’t turn into a harem and if this author stays consistent with updates it could actually top most of the fanfics on this site.

This is why we can’t have nice things.

Off to a good start author.

You look like a burner account yourself 🤡 only one comment on your account.

He could’v taken TRT and hit the gym to prove everyone wrong.

I‘m uncircumsized and offended.

System smh, Authors always go that route nowadays with the Harem included. God is such a tool to just grant his wishes. If i was God I would’v ripped him a new one for picking such generic wishes and I hope his system eats him after it’s finished building him up.

The story I hate Systems makes me think your mc is going to be devoured by his own system after being fattened up.

He has 40 times learning so you’re Going to have to edit this chapter. He will be better than Gwen in every regard no matter what because of his gift. Idk if you were trying to nerf the mc, but you kinda have a glaring plot hole and i will continue to bring it up until it’s adressed.

Don't burn yourself out like those other authors and take your time. This is going to take over the rankings eventually.