Joker05

Read until chapter 55, nothing really happens. Auther just keeps on rambling about the future and events that play no significance to the current events. MC is your typical useless luck struck plot armor MC. Outside of making money through the stock market, which he pawned of to one of the female characters, he really doesn’t do anything important. The flow of the story is on the slow side and the events are so random that it ruins the reading experience. For the Auther. Don’t explain so much useless information. Show your story don’t tell. Show the MC having a meeting and telling each individual their goal and when they need to accomplish said goal by. In other words, you’re trying to make your MC this great leader without them showing any leadership skills. Don’t tell us why a character is going to be important or how they’re related to the MC, show us through their interactions with the MC. Example, when you had the two neighbors scene talking to his parents, don’t explain who they are. Instead just leave them until they show up in the main plot of the story. Then inform the readers using the interaction between the MC and the other characters. That’s all I’ve got for you. In summary it’s not a bad story, the author just needs to learn how to write better. An editor would help but I’m aware of how expensive that can get.

Hit the NUKE button

Nothing is done solely for good intentions. For the rich and powerful an orphanage is a great place to gain positive pr and talented individuals. Hence the monetary investment. There are a few who do good things not for the gains but sadly they are the vast minority.

Sounds like it considering how Chaotic Energy is poison to humans.

Would depend on how each level scales. So he could be peak Spirit Emperor or he could be lvl 7-9 Spirit Emperor. No real context is ever given in these novels. Most just vaguely say you need a lot of Apirit energy to level up.

Not as reckless … right.😏

Only got to chapter four then abandoned it like your father did your mom. JK, the story is ok however the repeat of mc hating his pass life and being depressed for the millionth time was just so pathetic. Then the repeat on the pirate ships and their outdated weapons and ships as well just sent it over the top. You literally read the same basic chapter four time in a row. Not to mention that mc’s ship was able to hack into the pirate ships but he still just blasted away like some brain dead muscle head instead off just taking control of their ships. Look even the pirate of our colonial past knew how valuable an intact ship was that they chose to board them and take them over instead of blasting them to bits. They even announced their presence by raising a fucking flag!! Not just target ship and fire on sight. Not to mention that Mc chose a fucking sci-fi katana over a bank account that had enough money to let Mc live a life of luxury multiple life times over. Real does explain how stupid the mc/author is. Just copy ever other space sci-fi Isekai that was written before. Not worth the effort to read it.

We get it his life sucked. He depressed, now move on with the story.😩 Don’t need to repeat it for the millionth time this chapter.

So what if the ships wheren’t pirate?

Why didn’t he just hack their controls? A full intact ship would be worth more then scrape metal.😩