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Flame_Slasher

Flame_Slasher

Lv6

A bored reader

2017-10-27 BeigetretenIndia
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  • Flame_Slasher
    Flame_Slasher8mth
    Verschickt

    At first I thought the fanfic to be interesting... A combination of HP and MCU. But as story progresses it the world development became bad. Like only two times MCU related scenes are included in the story till chapter 100. Like using the scrolls and facing dimensional beings would have attracted the sorcerers. Also the MC is trying to follow canon but he doing everything to change canon. Its quite paradox. I stopped at ch 100 since it became boring

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    Magus of the Wizarding World
    Bücher und Literatur · Arrowinmyknee
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  • Flame_Slasher
    Flame_Slasher8mth
    Antwortet auf KojiSan

    @KojiSan When's your asoif novel new chapter publishing

    Ch 9 Chapter 9: Basketball Club
    altalt
    Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)
    Anime und Comics · mythoast
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  • Flame_Slasher
    Flame_Slasher9mth
    Verschickt

    I have read till the introduction of ghastly. Up till now, I think you need to do more world building. Attacking regular people with pokemon attacks at higher level will be very hard. You need to introduce more super human villans

    altalt
    Pokemon Master of Marvel (MCU)
    Anime und Comics · GJCaesar
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  • Flame_Slasher
    Flame_Slasher10mth
    Kommentiert

    why do you keep saying "young man with medium and wavy hair" instead of folker

    Ch 5 Egg hatching
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    Pokemon: The Steel Tyrant
    Anime und Comics · Jims_Rid
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  • Flame_Slasher
    Flame_Slasher2yr
    Kommentiert

    where is the novel published

    Ch 25 Chapter 25 - Truth and Sex in Vegas (2)
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    The Road to the EGOT
    Prominente · Legacy_24
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