jerryeleko

Why the flowery language? why not use your own voice and correct grammar mistakes with chatgpt or grammarly? there are a lot of things being said that could have been summarized with fewer words. I started reading this because although the first few chapters were simplistic in writing style, I still felt the author's intent in the writing. Now, it just feels like I'm reading something written by an AI.

Also thanks for another great chapter!

What happened to Jean? She's feeling very underutilized now. What about Magneto and his place in the pantheon? You were doing so many interesting things before that I wish you weren't in a rush to explore new things yet.

one of paragon angels

Happy Birthday!!!

It's a great story for turning the brain off for a few hours every day. Sometimes, the writing style frustrates me because the more intelligent characters were just sounding like the mc's simplistic take on life. I imagined him to be a character like Cid from Eminence in Shadow, who is a very flippant character in a very serious world. I wish that could have been showcased properly. I'm sure the author will have all the chances in the world to make those adjustments in the future. Good luck!

battle iq: AOT's Armin vs bertoltd's collusus battle.battle instincts:AOT's Ackerman's bloodline.

Are you imagining yourself being the Mc?

Sigh... another bashing fic. I get that the ministry is curropt, but taking every chance to bash them is distracting.

'nearly impossible'