This whole book ist just fillers and fillers and fillers. The world creation is really lame and supervicial. Characters are really boring and the communication between them is also not great. A chapter can just be them moving from a to b... With no interaction or story. Wtf this it not a story this is just a waste of time

Really bad. The story is so boring and you feel like it is written by a 6 year old. Waste of time and money. Art style is okay but overly focused on beauty

Why is the quality decreasing? A lot of the last chapter feel just like filler. A lot of times i regret spending coins on chapters. What happened in this chapter:eating, stupid side story of unrelevant chars and then a hint that the "boss" might be more important. Dude, common... This also happened when he collected the other beasts... no body wants to read this

Nice one

Don't do this .. We have enough harem stuff here. I want action and fun not this balls deep action

Love it! Great story keep it coming [img=update]

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Please no. Let it be destroyed. I love it that main/important chars can also die! Keep it up

How did he move into the soul gem last chapter to escape

Boring. And stupid conversations ................. ...... ........... ................ So lame and too fast. No character building.. ......

What the ****.. After 14 chapters I directly need to pay. Well up to here I think this whole story is rushed and not really unique. I don't like the love triangle in this story, kind of feels like Japanese writing style. After 14 chapters I can only say waste of time!

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The story moves too fast. It makes everything else redundant. To much stuff not well enough thought through and low quality writing.. I love the idea but everything just don't make sense