Mystero

Harem seeking protags are always boring. Gonna drop it.

LOL. ok i am out. MC is far too mentally weak. I see him falling to the darkside sometime in the future. There is 1 rule in fanfiction, NEVER TELL YOU ARE REINCARNATED OR YOU HAVE FURTHER KNOWLEDGE.

You do realize that muscles in star wars dont do shit? And its all the power of the Force?

Why does he has a Master when he isnt even Padawan yet?

A creep mc.

A rant in the 1st few paragraphs. There goes the interest in reading this fic.

14 and 16 year olds are acting like they are 30. Calling a Major God like Hestia naive LOL. When they are the naive ones. You wanted to write 14-16year olds then write them like they are their age.

Meh, next time just drop them into orario directly. And no ROB/god chapter.

Just insert them earlier. There is no reason to change the OG.

So the priorities are like every chinese mc? Trying to fuck every hole in the universe?