krishna0512

well of course these people going everywhere spreading this chinese name pollution.

man just how hard can it really be to get the names right?

I thought branch members left for snow country?

a omnipotent system should use proper grammatical term. its transmigration not reincarnation..

I have better version of this in my head.. "Even after I leave, don't slack off, okay? Next time we meet, I don't want you two to be so weak that you can't even stand properly in my presence."

yeah this is true, but then again you are not oda.. when zoro does it "occasionally" its funny, but if it persists more in your story it will become annoying pretty fast. and just another advice you also have to look at the scale, in 1000 one piece chapters zoro's bad direction comes up hardly 30-40 times. basically what I am saying is that zoro's character is not defined by his direction sense unlike your MC, but just in this chapter alone you have mentioned lucy's direction 3 times.

probably!!?! its definitely, ain't noone in the world that calls sharingan "kaleidoscope"

with this type of mentality he better not have any possibility of conqueror's haki in the future due to some insane plot armour.

well here comes the customary racist chapter..

yeah man power levels are all over the place, one minute he is killing god's knights and fighting aokiji next he is running away from a rat who shanks basically scared with a look.