BlackCat666

Yeh i liked it to, one of the better ones to come out of trial reads

Enjoyable storybuilding but severely needs an editor, feels like it could use grammar work done. honestly don’t understand how its got so many 5 stars 🙂

Really loving the story so far, keep up the good work author!!

Ye Wan is one harsh mf

I nearly died from laughing at poor Yun Lige

It feels like it needs to be broken into smaller paragraphs. The spacing isnt great, the grammar isnt great either, and feels like a bad harry potter copy. It is unique in some ways and i think it has its good points, so goodluck author all the best

Yeh my exact thoughts to

Not to spoil anything but as of (30) now is has come close but not yet. It feels like it might take 100 chapters, not that that’s a bad thing tho.