Sir_Harven

Yeah oogway is like the ultimate therapist if you want to find peace/balance within you

What kind of sound 'Guluo Guluo' is? The only thing came close to mind is chucking gallons of water to have that kind of sound

The problem I have in this fanfic is that he didn't have any mastery in any of the magic system(or you just failed to mention it?) like you know just a mastery from HP wizarding magic system is gonna make him so OP and very tricky to deal with. this is him living centuries already and he still like the same vulnerable inexperienced newbie he is just like in the beginning even with that 12 talisman and many artifacts that made him almost invulnerabe against normal mortal and a superstrenght above average man with a wide margin enough that his paramater should be close enough to the level of gods and he still didnt manage to dodge the knife stab from a child like dude sometimes you show mc as op as he carelessly talk to gods,devil and angel alike as if he already match/exceeded them in physical and magical might then out of nowhere he got stab like a btch by a mortal child thats so lame, even if the weapon is enchanted its not enough reason to make him looked like weakling, so author pls made it clear how powerful he is and clarify how many magic system he already mastered so that we can follow up to your storytelling

Naming him drake wont do with a devil in the phenex clan since they had a thing naming their children starting with 'R' and they got pride issues and they wont name a child of their own related to dragons since you know they are pheeeeenix??like dude go find some new name no matter how unique it is just start with 'R' it can't be that hard isn't?

Edit1: the translation and terminology got a little bit better than raw ai translation but there still many terminologies you can improve and their talk sometimes became akward idk if its a problem in the translation or its the og author's fault

The translation and terminology got a little bit better than raw ai translation but there still many terminologies you can improve and their talk sometimes became akward idk if its a problem in the translation or its the og author's fault but still thanks for the reply

Can you sort your chapter list? its so messy

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Idk man with just Dr Genus template he can do much more since he is genius in many field not just biology he is also genius in the field of cybernetics and with his vast intelligence he can even create a business as front for his experiment did the author forgot Dr. Genus in his original world used his intelligence to make various contributions to the world its just author really downplay his abilities and idiot enough to start with the street beggars/addict personally giving vials at that like wth is this did he forgot the clones series atleast he can trust his clones not just some random street schmuck Here good example of dr genus ff - https://m. fanfiction.net/s/14365317/1/

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