Lord_Harven

Dude why are you not using some items like 'adventures of jackie chan talismans' or 'Charms or bezel' that can atleast power-up his fighting abilities, with those items he would be less look like a suicidal idiot

Thanks for the chapter! So Danmachi?? Hestia's falna and flames can enhance him and his people or To aru?? Accelerator or Aleister Crowley and since their tech is abit advance they can copy their data although the problem is there are many OP characters there

Thanks for the Chapter! Everthing is ok until the last part where mc throws a threat to sirzech and making him afraid abit ?? Dude c'mon ultimate tier to super devil tier their power is far apart and whats more sirzechs is a war veteran while mc is too green even with his templates hes not that experienced in fights yet he talks like victory is certain well i guess it will pyrrhic victory yeah but still its dumb for him to do that

So is it like freya is her mama now since you know sitonai's Freyja part represent purity, I hope that freya should realize when they talk face to face that her feeling of 'love' to sitonai that she obsessively craves is not 'romantic love' but 'maternal love' and it would be interesting to see everyone's reaction if sitonai called her mama/mother and she didn't object since basically it is true in some sense

I continue to read it in chinese site and sorry for the low rating but this is how i viewed it in honesty, the world background is mashup of unusual combination that the author should just seperate other supernatural to dxd main the moment the author introduce the otherworld travels because it will create some conflict its ok if the others are anime with only regular mudane highschool life but its a mixbag and im unsure if the author will just once again force everything and pretends everything is fine, sure it doesn't have the usual chinese bs about nationalism and young master arrogant this or arrogant that but the story is such a let down when its good at the beginning but then it turns out this is the typical pokemon style harem with random ability given to the girls after accepting to the harem group sure i can cope with that, but it is so fast paced that the author just forced everything and it doesnt makes any sense at all but i guess that i should have expected it and shouldn't trust the translator word for it since this is a chinese fanfic and there are still the mentality that everything will always goes as planned in pokemon style harem even it breaks their characters so much for a high rating in chinese sites that i forgot their taste in fanfics. Sorry for the criticism TL guy i appreciate your translation but this is the highest rating i can give. Ps. The reason this still got at least a 3stars is because of the TL guy hard carry this ff with his fast update and writing quality.

For a Fanfic its good overall if you compare it to other ff this is great even, the only problem I have is ryan aquire strenght too fast that itself is okay but there are no rest between like take some vacation in other world or have some hobbies like brewing drinks, concoct potion, cooking foods, forging weapons, crafting artifacts and then sells it you know like foodstand, restaurant or just create a shop where he can sell many things as his hobby do something mundane and enjoys it not everything needs to fighting or training since he is already too much powerful in some worlds

Or in campione, you know when they killed a heretic god they take their authorities

He is very much overpowered in this place have you ever thought that he can relax in this place, you know like create a food stall, potion store or Pub with his own brewed alcohol since you said in another chapter ryan wanted to create his own beverages just for fun, since ryan is a scum cleaner may its time for him to clean the soma familia then create his own beverages

Ah yes make his soul more beautiful then go to danmachi to make freya more paranoid in finding him

Stay focus on anime worlds or tv series picking the chinese novels will turn your power ranking to sh*t