This version is much better. Thank you author!

I need to reread this. I think. Am I the only one who had a hard time understanding what was happening?

My prediction: MC will marry Elia, who will birth him some children, but will die by the time the Rebellion happens. Then he will marry Cersei, or maybe even Lyanna (most likely not)

Legolas' twin sword are not suitable for being an inheritable heirloom. They don't have crossguard ideal for duels, and I doubt his descendants will have the ability to use dual swords. The shorter range is not ideal either for fighting while horse/dragon riding.

With all the buildup I was hoping for some accident/surprise to happen tbh.

A violet egg? So not a canon one... Unkown who hatched it as well...

A pity that MC's third son was a female. If it were a male, House Celtigar might have gotten the hand of Helaena Targaryen. And if Viserys intends for Rhaenyra to reign as Queen, why did he chose his second son to marry Rhaena, instead of his eldest son Aegon?

Both Rhaenyra and Aegon had a claim, one as a chosen heir and the other as eldest male. Viserys should have not married again if he intended for Rhaeyra to rule anyways. Dragonlord Valyrians might have been doing marriage of eldest sister to eldest brother to avoid succession crisis with older sisters. When dragons exist, physical prowess would be less important so women could also rise to positions of power

omg I missed this fic!

Thanks! It was time for MC to get some luck! :D With all the Macho Braces, I hope Machoke can become Top Silver, and use the evolution to Gold :3

Ouff, doing an info dump in the middle of a multiple-chapter scene is not the best. It slow downs the story a lot, you could do the info dump later

We will know their potential soon huh... I'm hoping for a Silver Machoke, Gold Rhydon and Platinum Kadabra, but it most likely is Bronze-Silver-Gold...

If Killer B is 10 years old, it is definetely too early. I would have waited for him to be at least 14-15 years old, already Chunin-Jonin levels. And even then, the 3rd Raikage is still alive, Hachibi's rival for a lot of years, who recently "won" the fight by sealing him again. Any person would be reluctant to follow orders of your rival/enemy and the true person responsible of your incarciration. Hachibi would have mellowed out more after 3rd Raikage's death, with his son A being more soft on Killer B and their sibling relationship.

Hachibi shouldn't be so easily cooperating that early with Kumo. Before Killer B, he used to rampage, and even is the one responsible for the 3rd Raikage's self inflicted wound.

No Calm mind?

Ouff, wasn't he just a teen? A pity.

If this really is a Death World, Healing moves like Rest and Recover are a must. Evasion/Defense as well

What about those Pokemon that don't evolve? They can't use the push of evolution to improve their talent. Another example of the disadvantages of the Talent System, it makes single stage Pokemon very non desirable, even if they were already unpopular IRL.