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Tftc!
Can you share the original name of the book if you're translating them and want to drop them? Both the story and translation are good, but it's still too soon to gather more reader since fanfiction translation usually gather more chapter after at least 50 or even 100 chapters
It's cool how you develop the story, it's filled with character development with Ricky as the main vocal. Keep up with the good works author, thanks!
Tftc author! Now, let's talk about the usage of the system, one of the main point of this story is the system, but the MC didn't fully uses it. why? I don't really understand but, i assume it's because not every women will get a mission for it, right? Cmiiw, but if that's true, then you need to write them repeatedly in a different way. You might use some monologue like "oh, a target... Haven't seen it in a while" or narration that explains it. For power up, you don't need to fully write the smut in details. Although it's cool and i like them. It'd be hard to continue since the story will ve repetitive and you'd be bored of writing them and feel tedious. Interact with important character only, and just skip it for some C,D,E grade people. Anyhow, the story is great. Keep up the good work! Thank you for your diligence and have a nice day
you can put them at the end of the chapter, or just abbreviate them without adding explanations unnecessarily. make a line when you want to put an info dump, like start it with a ____ item a, b, c ,d ____ then end it with another to make it easier for reader to skip them
Thanks for the great chapters as always author... Info dump isn't a trouble at all, but you can also make an information table at the bottom for additional text. Showing then at the middle of the story can jeopardize immersion. Anyhow, it's a great chapter
well, people had different level of cruelty they can bear, i guess...
no
nah, the one that had phd is his other incarnation. this claude is still a kid, lol.fyi, he forgot to use that because he usually always maintain his mana so he can use that to heal himself rather than wasting it for other things
yeah, he's dumb rotfl