Zayah

bro, we would like to be there to experience what the main characters and friends did, not skip it. seriously, this is just bring lazy, for the sake of getting to the part you want to.

dialogue*

... ... copy the above and use it. If for whatever reason you, the author, actually read this, PLEASE go back and edit the Nii and Nee mix ups, as well as removing outdated Notes at the start of the chapter. it helps future readers. - Shortening the Patreons ad is the Key to victory. -Using " ... " instead of Many more than 3 or 4, should be a Holy decree. - Mentioning Money directly should be avoided. - Editing older chapter's for future readers is called Class - Removing expired notes, Besides new years greetings and such should be required. - Old deals and Patreons rates should be deleted, but The Dates and Year need to be noted in any Future deals, particularly the Year, as old ones you havent deleted could be mixed up for another year. - Using Audio on your chapter's every now and again should be law by now, as it actially helps with editing, and picking up on weird dislogue or spelling. also "tells" you the issues this app still retains.

hes a hypocrite. towards others And himself

should Up the weight, and Ise more Chakara, so that it can slowly infuse into the body more or at least travel theough faster under strain.

honestly, without the social constraints of our society and the training, magical skills, I'd be a bit hesitant but would still be able to kill. add a mission to kill bandits known for their cruelty, I'd probably be fine or rather, wxcited with killing them, or even craving a bit of carnage. but that mindset would be solidified a bit more, especially after a few years of living in and around the kinds of people he has, yes that also includes the extremely Kind family and friends, as I'd likely not want them dead or even at threat of such things as bandits, rogues, as well as the fact, that if I was Toshiro, I'd be happy at the fact I wasn't born a fucking farmer, in a rebellion group, or in the Uchiha a week before Itachi killed them, or better yet, NOT part of ROOT. because holy fuck, he had MANY bad options.

lol. and yeah, the MC I think, is Actially written as a hypocrite, like, I really feel like its intentionally done. He even has an un-natural overconfidence, and Genral understanding of things regarding the Elemental nations, that make him believe he's superior and much wiser(along with the supposed mental age gap). We as readers, look at it in a "wtf?" kind of way, but I sometimes think its just him and copium doing the talking. however, Hes a top scorer and all that, but has a Warped mondset, of Modern society, which he knows is actually Cold and umcaring, but laws prevent outright muder and sins of attrocities are minimised, thus he Over... not sure wgat word to use, but its along the lines of thinking vs knowing vs mind vs Fact vs the main think, I believe hes still didillusioned to the fact hes in the naruto universe. honestly, this could be overthi king it, but it could also be interesting if its something like this.

kirishima*

lol, kirihimete casually blocking and being at a loss, or the fact the bandits know their fucked?