CrazzyChemister

Sometimes the autor explain everything detail by detail, but on some parts he just ignores everything that he himself did in the past creating an iconsistence on his work.

I give up on this fanfic, it was good when it lasted

Red it in only 3 days, now I can somehow smell iron after reading it nonstop and without rest, overwall it's a nice novel to pass time, but the conclusion of it was a little bit anticlimatic and it let A LOT of things open, it was like the autor just wanted to finish it because he didn't want to continue it anymore.

nah, he choosed the most dificulft evolution for his pet and the system warned him about that, and he still ask why it is soo dificult? meh sometimes autors have to play dementia, and it doesn't even make sense for the Mc forget it because he basically have an ablity that cover this exact issue, I guess it's paly dumb for content

at least for me it's just like he forgot all the Mc's personality that was biuld in those past 300 chapters in the actual chapter, the description of his emotions and actions are not even close to the chacter that he builded in the past, I judge it because I red this fanfic without an pause in those past days, this is somehow frustating seeing the Mc become almost child like with all the things he already acomplished, like in his fight against kingpin, why was he acting like he didn't already killed hundreds of beings, acting all emotional like killing one more person that deserved would be something new in his life.

I liked the first 300 chapters but after jessica joined the Avengers it's like it all droped down hill, it almost feels like he is using A.I to create the novel? it's just like he forgot all the Mc's personality that was biult in those past 300 chapters, the description of his emotions and actions are not even close to the chacter that he builded in the past, I come to that conclusion because I red this fanfic without an pause in those past days and got where in the actual chapter, and this is somehow frustating that the character I grew close on become something without a "soul"

Are you using A.I to create the novel? it's just like you forgot all the Mc's personality that was biuld in those past 300 chapters, the description of his emotions and actions are not even close to the chacter that you builded in the past, I judge it because I red this fanfic without an pause in those past days and got where in the actual chapter, this is somehow frustating

why did the mc acted like he didn't kill someone in those past chapters?I understand that he is sad and angry about the death of the other peter hurting his 'aunt', but he act like killing the kingpin wouldn't be something that he don't do in his daily life, and all of that just after the justicer and deadpool plot where they killed A LOT of people. I just don't understand it at all, it's like the autor forgot his own history

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