Going In Completely Blind

This is a good piece. I'm enjoying reading this. The protagonist is interesting, plot is going interesting as well. Great potential!

impressive writing skills, I felt like i was watching a movie. The fictional characters came alive. Good job Author, 👍👍

Oh la la! This is gorgeous and beautiful I am impressed,well written like a bro keep it up and great😉 I love it so much.... Masterpiece, art piece

Wow what is this shining light coming from this book, It's BEAUTIFUL!!!! 🔥🔥🔥🔥👏 I love it ❤️ You keep on shining 🌟 Fighting! ✊

A good read, the plot is solid I love the outline

Love the 4th wall breaking. Reminds me a lot of Deadpool .

The fanfic puts a whole different spin on the mostly disliked self insert fanfic. It combines quite a bit of fourth wall breaking, with 3 of the most recognizable 90s anime magical girls from the genre of the same name. And while some, if not most self-insert fanfics, feature the author using their knowledge of the show to make some mostly drastic changes to the show that the fanfic is based off of. While this fanfic, does the opposite, the self-insert has absolutely no knowledge of the anime canon timeline, and only has information regarding the anime characters of the show. Well worth reading the whole thing.

First of all, the concept, too different and described which is eye-catching. Doesn't feel rushed and the 4th wall break made me wanna leave a review XD The MC's thought process is kinda chaotic I suppose.

I am new to fanfic but it was a really fun read. The plot settings and conversation between the protagonist and other characters are interesting, especially the fourth wall breaking chapter. How to greet someone politely? Hey pervert🤣. Well, that was what the author taught me (just kidding). It was worth a read. Keep it up author👌

I am absolutely enthralled by your story! The way you weave together complex characters, plot twists, and emotional depth is truly masterful. Your art style is stunning, and the pacing is impeccable. I find myself eagerly anticipating each new chapter, invested in the characters' journeys and the unfolding drama. Your passion and dedication shine through on every page. Keep sharing your incredible talent with the world – I'll be cheering you on every step of the way!"

This is a good novel. I also admire the fact that the author hasn't locked the chapters yet which makes us readers read more for free for a while. The story building is good, although I got confused at first. Story is also set in first person view so you won't have a hard time distinguishing the mc from the others when talking. Keep doing your best and work hard! Good job.

First Impression This story is relatable to my childhood anime shows. It is similar to that famous shoujo school girl sailor student anime shows. It is a fun read, I recommend this story if you are interested with the genre. In depth review I never thought that this story was a fanfic. The premise is way original and the way the story unfolds is different. Although there were elements I see which were similar to an anime I saw. I found this story standing out. The pacing was fine, not overwhelming and gives us time to digest what the story was all about. The character was relatable also, with the character's perks being likeable as well. Lastly, the writing quality is good. It's detailed and describes the scenes well. Closing I had fun reading this story. I see that the author is dedicated in writing. To the author, keep up your good work. There's a lot in store for you and this story.

The book has a great setting, plot and character development. Definitely a 10 out of 10

The idea of combining reality with anime is a fresh and exciting approach. Also, the interaction between the protagonist and characters from well-known series like Wedding Peach is entertaining and brings moments of surprise. Breaking the fourth wall is a resource you handle well, giving the story a comedic touch and making the reader feel part of it. One recommendation: in certain parts, the excess of internal thoughts and references to technical details can slow down the pace. Simplifying some descriptions would help the story move more dynamically without losing its essence. You have a story with a strong concept and a style that's very much your own.