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Until death do us apart

Autor: Zelkolak
Fantasy Romance
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Lesen Sie den Roman Until death do us apart des Autors Zelkolak, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.When death is in the way. When a girl is caught between friendship crush and a newcomer, what could go wrong? Is the changed friendship better or unintentional falling in love better? That's for me, t...

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When death is in the way. When a girl is caught between friendship crush and a newcomer, what could go wrong? Is the changed friendship better or unintentional falling in love better? That's for me, this evil author, to decide. Mwa-ha-ha-ha! (fits of coughing).

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yaejin
yaejinLv3yaejin

I’ll give you five stars author! It’s a thank u for making me laugh heehhe 😆 I so love your writing and also the plot! I think u need to explain more abt strigoi btw. Just one question tho, is this inspired by Vampire Academy? Anyway, all in all, this looks like a promising story. I hope u won’t drop it. I can’t wait to read the romantic love between florin and diana 🥰

minho_Shiny
minho_ShinyLv3minho_Shiny

The author done a very good job in describing and the first chapter hooked me up. I was so surprised when I found that the boy actually died in third chapter.i was so surprised that I thought 'did I misread the chapter' and reread to get the confirmation. Anyway, coming to review The novel. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my Interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his hardwork.

Hesreth
HesrethLv10Hesreth

Necromantic love? That where this going? Really loved the begining. Love how you describe the characters. Really lke the humor too. I just got one gripe with this so far. Why the snake? T.T I'll let it slide for this review. Oh no no no that wasn't an intentional pun yuck---

NotUse
NotUseLv4NotUse

Five stars! The first chapter hooked me up, especially during the snake scene. Now I wonder if milk works :) Anyways, back to the review! The plot is interesting and unique despite having three chapters so far. As for the story development, it seems to be at a nice pace since the guy died in chapter two. This shows that the author gets straight to the point and not make long paragraphs just to increase word count. As for the writing quality, I have noticed a few misspelled words. Probably proofreading would do the trick. Especially in chapter two. Anways, its not a big deal to me so yeah, five stars!!! Keep up the good work author!!!

CMO
CMOLv14CMO

Nice story though the chapters are still low,hope to read good things a head.The characters chosen so far so good.I wish you all the best with this journey of story writing.

Jay_y
Jay_yLv2Jay_y

Alright so this is a really good story. But it would be better if you could think of some more chapter to go with it. Keep it up author👍👍👍

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