Twice Reincarnated

Im hesitant to rate my own novel, but there was no other place to put this message. From now on this novel will be updated weekly. A new chapter will be up every Monday. Thank you for reading my story.

After reading what you have so far I was confused at first until I went back to read Description. I feel as if you would need to put that with the prologue. The story so far is good but the lack of updating is the only reason it has 3.4. If it was updated more often it would have 4.0 stars😔. So the only thing needed is updates other than that it's a good novel.

Story feels a bit rushed. If you do not read the summary you wouldn't understand the first chapter. It also feels a bit that the author has an image in mind But is forgetting to add the details in the chapters. Overall the writing isn't bad with only a few grammatical errors. Story could be a good read, however the author would need to slow down the pace and explain a bit more about the world, MC and MC's history

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