Tragedy of The Eternal Champion

Vivid writing, tragic storytelling, amazing author, and a super cool main character. Not much else to say. If you all have time, I highly recommend reading this novel.

So far the story it's good, there's some scene that i feels like its moving too fast but its not big deal and i can still enjoy the story. i can't wait for the nexgt update.

A new and fresh concept of someone seeking to be a champion eternally. It was fire, and I guess we never know the potential until we read the last chapter.

Truly an interesting tragedy novel. The names are unique and the premise is promising.....There are some grammar errors but nothing too detrimental. At the beginning, I feel overwhelmed by too many things happening at once.Anyway, keep it up author! As a fellow tragedy writer, I'll cheer you on.

I really enjoy this novel, and I can’t wait to read more about Eternus’s journey. It’s tragic but there are elements of joy. There’s a cute cat, and a lot of awesome fighting. You really can’t do better than this.

I like the progression of main character, story is really captivating, plot is really interesting, looking forward for more chapters from the author

when i say that this version is good i am so honest , i like the way u changed the story man .your writing style improved a lot and the story is already good .can't wait to see what eternus is going to do i the next chapters

The story has a very tragic setting and I liked the flow of the story. However, there is some weird capitalisation going on, but that did not disturb much of my reading. Sometimes, the pacing is a bit weird, but it was still good enough for me to understand what is going on. All in all, not bad and I'd like to see what you will do with Eternus! Keep up to good work!