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The Wound In The Stars

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What happens when you suddenly get dropped into a galaxy far far away. You have a few god given gifts , how will you use them. AN: This is my first time writing. I hope this goes well. I am just writing as hobby . sorry in advance ,if the updates are irregular in the future, but i will try my utmost to keep this going. All constructive criticisms are welcome. I don't know all the lore, so I have to do a lot of digging around to find them. And this story will most certainly deviate from canon a little bit, the MC existing itself is a deviation in the flow of canon. Please rate and review. Disclaimer : I don't own the Cover Image. Pillaged that of google. All writes of Star Wars belong to Disney or any other Mega corporations that might buy Disney in the future . I only lay claim to the original characters that pop up all over because I am a lazy ass who thinks making shit up is better than finding canon names and the story arc I introduce( well sometimes). Warning: The first ten chapters are a bit tough to read. It took me that long to realise that spacing in Microsoft Word and Web-novel are different. Will edit it in the future. With that out of the way, ENJOY!

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If you like star was. i would definitely give this fanfic a try. so far its been a pleasure to read, so much so i ended up binging the entire thing into late in the night, so kudos to you author. also beware of some spoilers but i would like to give some opinion on what i think is good and what i think is bad, and potential changes if the author want to bother. Writing quality is good, while not perfect, it is leagues ahead of the average fanfic. so good job here Updates arent super fast. but makes up for it with usually quite long and good chapters. no chapters really strike me as "filler" chapters where nothing really happens. so good job here aswell Story not exactly super unique. it follows a story which most of us a probably familiar with, making it easy to follow along. my current biggest gripe is the very glossed over star forge. this structure is very unique and very dangerous. (a bit of random star wars trivia for those interested.) --the star forge was made by "the builders" which by design is rather cruel and savage. since the star forge uses the force, it slowly inherited these traits and became a super powerful dark force artifact. which will corrupt any creature that is close for an extended period of time. -- mixed bag but still good characters i liked it a bit better earlier where we had some comic relief? with his squad and cousin talking and drinking. i would like that to show up a bit more from time to time. the only really developed character is the mc. the author can kinda get away with this. since we know pretty much everyone mentioned so far, because of the the films. to this im pretty neutral. world. star wars world. a classic and very expansive plenty of interesting things to take from. i enjoy kingdom building very much. so the early chapters spent on building up his first planet was quite enjoyable. generally i would still call this pretty good. some general thoughts. the fanfic is solid. however as a general theme. the novel goes very fast. i really want a bit more detail on some things, which could help fill out a bit where there is "time skip" this fanfic is also very comparable to the legendary mechanic, so if you like that novel, you will feel right at home here. i enjoy the mcs almost omnipotent way of handling himself, keeping both the sith and jedi on their toes a few other notes. the ships ive seen some people complain that they make no sense if you arent really into star wars trivia, im inclined to agree so my suggestion would be to use more broad and general terms fx. "type-dreadnaught heavily armed and armored with a massive 600000tonnes displacement" or something similar goodluck with your fanfic, i will continue reading

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