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the Pain of Power

okay, this is my first story, and the first time i have ever tried to write a story like this. If you have something to say to help me improve the story (without changing everything) i will gladly try to implement the changes, i will talk this as a chance to improve my writing skills and styles

neko_meow · Fantasie
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5 Chs

Chapter 1: WELCOME

Darkness surrounds the forgotten, unable to hide anywhere completely exposed

She is terrified, unable to do anything

"w-where am i?.....W-what happened?"

"WELCOME TO THE NEW SIMULATION" a loud mechanical voice rang out around her "YOU ARE ONE OF THE FIRST LOST TO JOIN US"

"lost?" she said curiously while searching for the source of the voice

the voice continued like she never said a word

"PREPARE TO ENTER, ENJOY YOUR NEW LIFE"

"what do y-"

suddenly all the girl could see was light