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The Eyes System

Autor: Keppn
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Lesen Sie den Roman The Eyes System des Autors Keppn, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.The Eyes System is set in the year 2027 in a post-apocalyptic world where humans are fighting for survival against an alien race that has taken over Earth. Noah, the protagonist, is a 17-year-old boy ...

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The Eyes System is set in the year 2027 in a post-apocalyptic world where humans are fighting for survival against an alien race that has taken over Earth. Noah, the protagonist, is a 17-year-old boy who lives alone in New York City after losing all his loved ones during the alien attack. Furthermore, the people gained a system that gave them powers beyond imagination. Some with simpler powers and others with simply absurd powers. Throughout history, Noah ends up getting into controversial situations that will put his humanity at risk. There are six major factions that control the surviving humans. Each faction has a leader with a special power, and the factions fight each other for control of the city.

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Hen1tuse
Hen1tuseLv1Hen1tuse

Honestly, quite good in my opinion. An interesting premise and idea that are valued by the author give a charming touch to the work. I recommend reading this novel, although, sincerely, I also highly recommend the author to review some senfencas that become confusing throughout the chapters. Moreover, I'll come back later in the story to do a more precise analysis. For now, keep up the good work and effort, author.

Seven_007
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The work has a very good idea. A well summarized but relatively strange synopsis may not please many, so I suggest you take a look at it later. I can't give too much of a review given there isn't much content available at the moment, however. here are some things about the work: The writing is normal/okay and doesn't get in the way, but it could be improved. Grammatical errors are constant and, if possible or necessary, I highly recommend using tools that can help you fix this. Also remember to improve the spacing you use between lines; in some situations it was a bit confusing to understand the descriptions. The idea is cool and can be worked on to improve over time. I'll try to stay here on your journey, and I'll come back later to make further observations about the work. Finally, sorry for the somewhat "superficial" review, and keep up the good work.

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