The era Of Shin Sekai

Erec pendragon , a budding mage who awoke with a weak Heart of Shin , still managed to keep up with the other mages , but one day while training , he died , meeting a mysterious woman who sent him back 300 years ago , 33 years after the appearance of the first magic , back to the time when people just discovered magic and had almost no knowledge about it. This world was completely different from what he was taught at school history classes, it was way more Chaotic as the monarchical system was going to be overthrown by associations of Mages. Was it something that he's previous life governement was hiding ? he decided to use his second life to investigate on a long journey, wondering of who was that mysterious woman and how to travel back to his previous life. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * it's my first time ever writing a novel, any constructive criticism would help me!