The Alicole Witch and the Demon Prince

Just a few chapters in, and the story is already intriguing. The world-building is done nicely, and I look forward to more of Alika's growth. I'm even rooting for some romance with the Demon Prince XD if there's any. But the tag, though -- "betrayal" -- my suspicious meter is going up. Are they going to betray each other? XD Please, no. Looking forward to more chapters, author!

A human girl had nothing but a dream about magic. A demon prince had almost everything yet wanted more. This is a story of two different lives: the adventures of a HUMAN GIRL with a wish to conquer the art of MAGIC... "I had no money. No education. No hope. No future. The only thing I had was a fate to lose the last of my possessions, my free will… Until finally, I had enough of it all… I will have the skills to fight and win! I will have the knowledge to survive in the raging sea of unfairness, cruelty, hatred, and betrayal people call life! I will have the strength to defy the destiny I used to think there was no escaping from! See me tear my future from the grasp of fate! Because without the power of choice, one can never truly live..." ... and a DEMON PRINCE... "What would you do if you were offered unlimited POWER, endless STRENGTH, constant SUPPORT, infinite WEALTH on just one condition: the end of your personal freedom? Ah, so that's your answer... Well, let's see how much it's different from mine!" Fate pushed the two to work together on an adventure of dungeons and quests to survive in a world of magic and monsters, good and evil, where things are seldom what they seem... *** Please, leave your comments at the end of the chapter (chapter comments). There is a bug in the new "paragraph comment" feature. When I edit the chapter, all the comments disappear. I don't want your feedback to get deleted! So please, use the chapter comment feature instead. Thank you! <3

The story is nice and I can feel the thoughts of a very creative author. The writing quality is of a standard traditional writing of a FL. I liked the story and the pacing is slow burn, which is cool by the way! With more exposure, this could be a blast!

That's a nice character design of Alika to begin with. I always liked strong and will-powered female leads, where alika just fits the category and coming to ml, his question what defines a person made me stop in my tracks for a lot while to define it. All in all, I should say it's an interesting book and worth reading it. Good luck author.

Writing Quality is fantastic and story development is likeable and very interesting. Character design is secretive and very beautiful. I really loved the two MC and their chemistry is hooking me to the story already. the background is unique and one can imagine it like a movie through the well-explained description. the transition of her childhood and the academy was a little vague and I thought the girl was already old enough. tbh the academy came like a surprise to me. and then Ramien as well.

This story is quite intriguing. Review Proper. Writing Quality. I think the author wrote the story well with little to no g-errors or if there is some, it's just how I am engrossed in the story to even notice it. Stability of Updates. The story seems able to update timely. Story Development and Character Design. It was written clearly. The story development was executed fairly well. The characters don't feel too bland either and they have their own charms. World background. Exciting and detailed. Overall this story is engaging to read already. Keep it up, dear author!

I'm a huge fan of the "fate pushing 2 people together" trope. And I really enjoyed reading this. The writing was great and it was super fun to read. You can tell right away that the chemistry between the two main leads is fantastic and hilarious. Great job!

Here is my review based on what I read so far: Story Development: I think the progress of the story is okay, but the direction and where the plot goes for me is quite messy in my opinion. First of all, Chapter 1-2 already set something interesting will happen than all of sudden Chapter 3 The MC just go to the Academy without even mentioning the previous or doing something after the event of Chapter 1-2 happen. It felt The previous two chapters are never exist. However, that problem can be fix by giving more mention about the previous thing or at least an inner monologue for The MC World Background; The world-building for me is quite interesting as there is magic and mythical creature, also many other things. However, , the world can be more fleshed out especially if the author explore of the environment or the description of the environment. Character Design: Alika for me is a final character and I think she will have a good development with the main Male Lead. While the side characters, I think they are all okay. However, I think Alika backstory can be more flesh out or the event after Chapter 2 occurred like how she got to the academy and many more. Overall that's all I have to say about this novel and good luck.

What's more fun than to read about a hate/love relationship between a witch/demon + slave/master relationship? Nothing! This novel has a lot of potential, the contrasts between the FL and the ML is the best!

nicely done. the FL is brave and has enough courage. being sold and forced to become a slave. but instead of accepting her fate, she going to fight. it's a story with a nice plot and a lot of mystery. magic is a main element in the novel. so all the best 👍

Alika is my favourite. I don't know why our fl can't be of bad heart. Alika always thinks about her friends, where they become enemies because of a man. World-building was slowly unfolding. i like the story. You will find humor and emotion. Great work, author.

I really like Alika's character. Finally, i could read about a strong female lead after a long time. The story is progressing very nicely and the dialogues also felt real. The world building is also superb. you did a good job.

Love the start of this book it's creative and the author did a great job in jotting this book down thank you, author, for writing this book it's amazing, loved the twist and turns through great work author a needed little editing but that doesn't stop me from recommending this book well done!!

I liked this book quite a lot. First, the FL rebels againt the 'cruel' parents, and after that she becomes a witch at the academy. The book manages to give off a subtle romantic feeling from the start while also cotaining elements such as magic, creating an interesting, fantasy world.

This is genuinely a good novel. I was surprised to find both good characters and amazing characters which was definitely good and kept me reading. Everything is detailed so you don't feel like you're missing some information. Amazing novel!

I haven't read more than ten chaps but I can say this is a good one. Check check ✅ The plot and storyline are very impressive and well defined. The author also got control of the writing style. I highly recommend

Amazing plot, dialogues, characters, and everything! I can't wait to read more! The beginning itself has captured my interest and as I read on, I find myself laughing at most parts. I really like our little witch's way of thinking, she's so cute and hilarious. Miss author had just turned me into her fan. XD

A vibrant and beautiful plot development, the start-up itself was intriguing from the very first line... The story had a thrilling step by step outline, starting from Alika's emotional scenario in the first chapter and the failure of her so-called parents. Her involvement with the horned-demon bully who expected her to be a little slave and place her on a diet to turn her skinner. Then her maturity... until they met— You should just read the book cos it's sweet!

Awesome world building. MC is a fresh graduate of mage academy and you can immediately get that magical academy vibe. It is too early in the story to get into the details of the magic but I am sure the author will in future chapters. MC, Alika, is a confidant, young mage who wants to forge her own path in the world. She comes across the demon, Remien, and that is when the fun part begins. The characters are sharply portrayed. Writing quality is very good and high level. Updates are regular too. The story develops at a great pace and I cannot wait to read more. Keep writing, dear author!

The story revolves around Alika and demon,and to learn magic Every scene is well defined words and sentences Alika character is also very amazing,novel is full of magical things and non human you'll not get bored, Writing Quality is so nice as well as synopsis is also very attractive and intersting story plot with good characters Reading forward and keep it up author![img=recommend]