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Systematic Uprising

Autor: Kamikaze_1
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You have certainly heard of losers reaching the peak of life using a system, but have you ever thought that Systems reach the peak of life using losers? Read on to find out the reason why. Well, this journey all starts with [Adamas, The System] Just a forewarning; This novel exposes the dark and gory history of the entities known as systems, starting with the history of an ambitious newly born creature Adamas the Villanous. *The Cover picture isn't mine and all its rights belong to its owner and creator.

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JJ_Prakoso
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Here are my honest thoughts about this novel: World Background: The Description of the world is mostly okay and it's easy to digest. I also like how the author quite establishing the system within the world in a fluid and clear way. However, the author can add more things, especially on the surroundings to make the world easier to remember and more fleshed out. Overall it's just need little things to add. Character: The character is just alright especially for the MC. However, I already addressed some issues regarding the MC in the comments. Therefore, I'm just going to say improve more on fleshing him out more. So far as I said before alright, and the author just need more time on showing his personality and his motivation. Plot: The plot is quite clear with the direction as I can say. Which is a good point. Even though Chapter 1 quite confusing, the author at least expands the lore with the ongoing chapters. Overall that's all I have to say about this novel and Good luck!!!

Scarlet_Wolf96
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The story is quite interesting for me. I'm not familiar with system or game genre stories, but I know a little that as long as I read, the element of surprise in this story is still lacking, found in chapters 1 and 2. The rest has made me curious. Good luck. 😊👊

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