Sword art online altered

As I approach the giant door I see someone standing in front of it looking at it nervously. As I approach her some detail I can make of here is she has green eyes black short hair. "hay are you ok?" as I say that she looks up at me "well this is my first time in a virtual world it bit overwhelming and I don't know how to play it." well I do feel bad for not help a person at a video game. "I can help you if you want " as I say that her eye starts to sparkle. " here take this so we can team up on on the enemy. As I say that I send her a team request a name show up saying 'ash' interesting name. When we enter the first thing I see is a boar I go in for a slash but it dodges my attack.

*BEEP* as I look around I see an icon in the corner of my eye. As I look at it word start to appear saying " double damage equip yes or no." the description says it will do more damage and a Slightly increase in speed. "Ok let's do this "I go in for a slash and I active my skill my sword starts to turn red. As it hit the Boer it leaves a mark on it bright red. The heath bar starts to go down and it rach the End and the monster disappears into a pixel. "Aaaah" I turn around just in time to see ash fall to the floor backward. I'm too far I won't re- " don't worry I got this." I turn toward the person who said that it came from the same way we enter. A man looks like in his 30 running down the hallway and reach ash and slash the beast. "Ash are you ok your not hurt are you. "Ya, I'm fine thank you Noah for asking." who is this person he comes in like it was nothing. "Ash and Noah hmm, Well Since you guys are ok I will be leaving then." who is he "wait who are you?" "me? I'm kirito see you some time again maybe." hmm Mabey will see him sometime again. "Do you want to continue for a bit more." ash gives a somewhat happy Smile Probably because of what happened only a couple min ago. "Yes l would be happy to Continued for a bit longer"