Starscourge Radahn in ATG

didn't read it but the concept of General Radhan, a being so powerful that while holding back the stars his opponent had to use something such as scarlet Rot just to squeak out what could pass as a victory against him from the so called undefeated champion melania, Radhan would understand the law of gravity the second his cultivation happened from the centuries of wielding and mastering gravity magic

Ah, what a shame that the author seems to have removed the story despite it being a really well written story. It is a classic and should be expected at this point

A fanfic where character is strong , mature and does not know about the story.I have seen many ATG fanfics where character always go for harem route starting with xia qiangue and helping her without any solid reason or for her beauty alone.I like this change of pace and hope you have enough inspiration and will to give this story a satisfactory ending.

hey what happend did you delete the story? it was good.

Bro this novel is absolutely and simply amazing, and its extremely promising (chapter 20) I really really really really really hope the author doesn’t drop this ff.

Writing Quality : 4.9 StarsStory Development : 5 starsCharacter Design : 5 starsUpdating Stability : 4.8 starsWorld Background : 4.8 starsOverall 4.8A relatively refreshing approach to writing this fic. MC not being OC/SI but instead crossover with a character whose background is already established is wonderful. Not choosing to use Yun Che's body is a bonus. Character interactions are just fine and the AU elements are well integrated into the world background. Overall a pretty decent fic that I don't recommend anyone to read whilst there are still a few chapters because you'll unconsciously binge through them and end up regretting it, just like I am now.

good fanfic I like yuanba it always bothers me that they wasted his potential, they always choose yun che which is boring because most of the fanfics are of him as MC

Does anyone know what happened? Did the author simply decide to abandon it? .....................................................................f...................................................................................................f........................................

A good quality fanfic. It has been a long time since I read anything good and new in this app. I hope you continue this wonderful fiction you are writing. I'm hoping you get more inspiration to continue writing and rest if you are having writer's block.

It’s perfect. I hope it never drops. Writing is amazing.

Now, this one is pure gold. I didn't expect to be this good.

This is a good book. Props to the author ........................m....mm...........mmmmmm.....................................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.

Even though I don't know the full lore Radhan , I am liking the author effort of fitting a character like him with different quirks in the world of ATG ... let's see how his arrival with change the destiny of everything

Let me tell you about this story: this is a story of our favorite general getting even more awesome and the most important is that there is no illogical scenarios. There was some small character development that was cleared very fast after it happened so be patient a bit. (only happened once so far) the mc grows adapt and he's not a weak-minded individual who forgets of his new goals. overall this is definitely my favorite fan-fic of 2023.

Good story, flows well so is easy to read as well as being entertaining.....................................................................

foda

Your novel is truly excellent; it makes other novels I've read seem dull. The character development and plot are superb. The protagonist, Radhan, is deeply explored. I'll eagerly await updates and further developments in this novel.

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did you delete this book I read until chap 8 then all of the sudden the chaps where all gone and can't find them

Oh no..... anyway. I didnt get to finish reading it. \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\