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Saga of the Overgod

Eastern Fantasy
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Lesen Sie den Roman Saga of the Overgod des Autors Heaven_Dream, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.Farjan Dowter, from the Mortal World has become a cultivator by helping a severely injured cultivator named Tromer, who, by chance ended up in their world where everyone is crippled because of an unkn...

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Farjan Dowter, from the Mortal World has become a cultivator by helping a severely injured cultivator named Tromer, who, by chance ended up in their world where everyone is crippled because of an unknown reason. Eventually, he will take a journey and will fight for his way into survival in the violent and irrational world of cultivation. But, in the world of cultivation, dangers are lurking everywhere, fights are inevitable. Cultivators are struggling to find themselves a way to get even more stronger. Conflicts always arose and strength rules the world. How will this totally mortal person become the Supreme Being that reigns above the heavens and all other beings? The Almighty Overgod.

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Heaven_Dream
Heaven_DreamAutorHeaven_Dream

This is my first novel. If you want to help me you can just put a constructive review. Please consider that I am not a english-native speaker. But, I am always trying my best to improve it. Thanks guys.

Zijay
ZijayLv5Zijay

Good start.. lokking forward for more chaps. Be positive and do your best! the novel is good.May you have more readers and may this will be flooded with votes. Aja!

HarmonicDragon
HarmonicDragonLv2HarmonicDragon

This is great. The story is well described. The idea is based on eastern fantasy with a mixture of western style. I like how the mixed story goes smoothly. The author probably thought of this well. I hope to see more chapters from this.

GeneralAverage
GeneralAverageLv5GeneralAverage

I liked the story so far. An improvement in the writing quality is needed tho. There were also times when I didn't understand what was going on at first so please make sure to check them. Good luck man :)

WalangPangalan
WalangPangalanLv2WalangPangalan

I like it. It's good. The story has something that got me hooked to it. I can't explain it, its hatd to find the word that will describe this. Probably, this will stand-out after a few months of exposure. I expect more from this

Chained_Soul
Chained_SoulLv5Chained_Soul

It was good. Actually i was suprised by cultivation original novels here in qidian. The quality is only lower than translated some even surpass it. The story was good. And dont mind those people who was dissatisfied. Your grammar and vocabulary is already good.………………………………………

randomgal23
randomgal23Lv4randomgal23

Hi there! This book really has a lot of potentials to begin with, the idea of the story is actually really good... All you need to work on is the intensity of your sentences, add more sensual words so we could feel how much hatred, joy, anger, or whatever emotions you want to put into... Try also exploring more words to improve such narration... This book is really great and I hope you improve by time :D

Yatogami
YatogamiLv5Yatogami

Although there are some mistakes like mixing up the past and present tense, the story's flow is good. 👍 A good editor/proofreader will do. Good luck!

DaoistSimba
DaoistSimbaLv3DaoistSimba

I like it! Especially the development of the story, the hype is maintained in almost every chapter. Hoping for more chapters. If the quality of the writing in the chapters improve in the next ten chapter, I don't mind to give a better mark.

ParagonImmortal
ParagonImmortalLv2ParagonImmortal

I like this novel. It is one of the hidden gems here at QI. I will recommend this novel to other readers. The story is great, it's gripping. The fight scene on the first chapter really got me hooked on this story. The comedy and the sarcasm also adds points. It is a good read. Keep it up.

Golden_Cloud
Golden_CloudLv5Golden_Cloud

I really like it! Author-san, you should not pay attention to people that just try offend and do not try to add to your writing experience. Hoping for more chapters!

quaay
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demioch
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DeJeL
DeJeLLv15DeJeL

*Remember, this review is based on the first 6 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I suggest removing the self-title from the beginning of the chapters, they are already titled... also there are some grammatical errors that I pointed out along the way.;,;. Positive Feedback: Good read, I had trouble stopping, hence the 6th chapter, I normally only do the first 5 chapters.;,;. I like the way you made it to where the cultivation is impossible for most in this world without needing a special ceremony of sorts to unseal their spirits.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will definitely continue this novel at a later time, I hope that you don't decide to drop it.;,;.

Huben
HubenLv4Huben

Well written, it seems many foreshadowing will occur. Fast update even though chapter is quite long. Based on the title it gonna a hell of long journey, I'm expecting the author to keep the update pace. Good work 👍

Ochoa
OchoaLv13Ochoa

Why were there 16 chapters and now there is only 1? I would have definitely rated this higher is there had been no loss of chapters and only an increase. I will change this once it increases again

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