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REBIRTH IN NARUTO WORLD

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Alex a person living in modern earth has died and reincarnated into the world of shinobi he never wanted this all he wanted is to lazy around and enjoy life but the fate is cruel as the selected world for him became world of shinobi where the strong survive and weak perish as he exactly knows that let's see what he do

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Ezukejyll
EzukejyllLv6Ezukejyll

Sooooooo, First thing I wanna point out here is that the Author reincarnated someone into another world, A world where EVERYTHING is based on Japanese culture. Yet the author went and give his MC the name Alex......... - Second, the grammar is horrible. Fair enough most fan-fic has terrible grammar and this also seems to be one of them. Author needs someone to point out the mistakes made so he can correct them. - There should be more to comment about however, as I was reading and got to the part where Kushina called out to both Naruto and 'Alex', then it was a instant drop for me. Also no capitalization on their names was weird to read as well.

Lize
LizeLv13Lize

For me.. not worth reading.. First Grammar is bad........... i know my grammar is bad too.. but try read this story and you will know.. 😅😅😅😅 and one thing that i hate about this problem is.. a lot of people already point it out in earlier chapter.. but author didnt show any improvement in the next chapter.. he doesnt try to change it.. if he write like 1 chapter a day.. i can understand why he doesnt have that much improvent.. but he upload a new chapter like every 3 days or something.. atleast he can improve a lil bit.. just adding " ".. is easy.. oh well.. next problem.. Second the name.... mc name alex.. in the world that based on japanese culture and everyone have japanese name.. its take away the immersion and for me destroy the story.. Third how mc pick up a girl....... yea you know.. the usual.. saving damsel in distress and fall in love.. yada yada yada.. 😅😅😅 and the target is pakura.. mc is naruto twin.. so his age should be around 12 or 13 or something.. around that age.. and pakura is like 30 or something? If im not wrong.. she should be in minato generation.. so i guess around 30.. When mc save her from the sand and mist deal to kill her.. (that suppose to happen way before mc even born).. she act like a lil girl.. just like wtf bro.. she is veteran ninja.. and have the same age like mc parrents.. how....... how she act like lil girl.. 😑😑😑😑 Well.. thats it from me.. I suggest you to try to read it.. Who know that you will like this novel..

Schnee_
Schnee_Lv5Schnee_

First thing first is this fanfic is like a man telling story Writing Quality : you dont know whose talking who Stability : Quite good for noob writer but i want you to read it first before updating it if its readable Story Development : its all the same fanfic tend to be same as alwyas they been Character Design : OC is quite good and he doesnt reincarnated in known character World Background : the world naruto live is already been created by the original author my rating to it can only go up if you make secrete realm and orignal characters in it

Sevi_01
Sevi_01Lv5Sevi_01

I can enjoy reading this even if there are some grammatical error. Unfortunately, the grammar is so horrible. You sometimes dont even know what the words are implying. 😶😶😶😶😶😶

Kurumi21
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