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Pokemon – Reincarnated to be the best Bug trainer

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You know when reincarnating you just think about being the best, maybe start with a rich family? Or in a slum where you can get strong by stealing? Or maybe lost in a forest and start with an egg?? Or just start with a persona such as red? Blue? Gary? Ash? Or anyone who has the greatest Plot armor anyone would want? Well not mine, since i started as a bug catcher Ps- Pic Not mine

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_ShiningMoonLight_Lv15_ShiningMoonLight_

I think it's a good attempt at a Pokemon Fanfic, and I could see why some people might enjoy this story. After reading up until he gets his starter, the thing that stood out to me is that MC literally doesn't talk to anyone. Well, he obviously monologs to us, which wouldn't be a problem, but that's all the first 3 chapters are... just a monologs. Kinda feels like we're more reading a journal written by the MC than an actual story. Feels real dry and non description when the MC doesn't talk about what it is like living in a new world. What's the difference, how does the living situation affect him, and what does his surroundings feel/look like? (To me, the story feels more like an outline for what's meant to happen without it actually giving details and descriptions of things affecting / happening / going on in the MC's life / surroundings.)

katarinabluu
katarinabluuLv4katarinabluu

it feels Hasty, no one's chasing u author slowdown, and the flow of story is so chaotic u have to pay extra attention to even understand the story, please accept criticism well and improve ur wring skills

Lox_Of_Sins
Lox_Of_SinsLv4Lox_Of_Sins

Meh, To be honest. Strange grammar puts me off from this. However. I understand writing a language from a different country is hard but sometimes you need to know that excuse only gets you so far. My story’s have some typos that I am working on to improve but I try to use proper grammar. That however is because my main language and only language is English. You need to study and improve your grammar and English skills buddy.. but if others enjoy this that doesn’t m mean stop making chaps. Just improve while you do so.

TruTatsuya
TruTatsuyaLv3TruTatsuya

ohhh interesting, haven't read it yet as I'm about to but from the title & synopsis I'm gonna love it lol.

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