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OUR DIARY

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Lesen Sie den Roman OUR DIARY des Autors HeartzDiary, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.This book revolves round the lives of students and teenagers. Welcome to our diary. Welcome to Zeal highschool....

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This book revolves round the lives of students and teenagers. Welcome to our diary. Welcome to Zeal highschool.

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Tribal_Ink
Tribal_InkLv1Tribal_Ink

Every chapters are very engaging, and you can feel the emotions of every characters. 👍👍 waiting for more chapters🥰

obiparadise_purity
obiparadise_purityLv4obiparadise_purity

The book is a good one, lessons to be learnt. I hope they find out who the killer is. Can't say much for now but will continue to read. Thumbs up author.

vorlefan
vorlefanLv2vorlefan

This has a nice idea to be developed! It gives you the vibe of: "I know that you did in the last summer". Few chapters, so I don't have much else to comment about. Things to improve: Grammar: It has grammatical issues that sometimes break the flow and readability. Suggestion: Listen up to channels like 'Southern Cannibal' and 'Let's Read', they have some amazing school stories. It will give you inspirations to develop the plot. Keep the good work :)

K_Thurah_2671
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Synopsis got me hooked. Nice one, author!

Medallionzz
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TranslatorKun
TranslatorKunLv3TranslatorKun

To be honest I am not a fan of this genre. However, this novel I feel gets more interesting progressively. I found the first 2-3 chapters okayish but liked the later chapters.

AAKASH_KATIYAR
AAKASH_KATIYARLv1AAKASH_KATIYAR

To be honest I am not a fan of this genre. However, this novel I feel gets more interesting progressively. I found the first 2-3 chapters okayish but liked the later chapters.

LazyErosage
LazyErosageLv3LazyErosage

The opening chapter introduces the main characters and their world, along with some intriguing elements such as secrets and fear. It has also set the tone for the story, creating a sense of mystery and suspense that will encourage readers to continue reading. If I had to give advice to the author, I would suggest that they continue to develop the characters and their relationships to create a more compelling and relatable story. Additionally, it would be helpful to clarify the main conflict of the story to give readers a clear idea of what to expect. Finally, the author should focus on maintaining a consistent and engaging writing style throughout the novel. Good Luck...

Marckaroni
MarckaroniLv3Marckaroni

Interesting premise with a good synopsis. I like how it is engaging with the reader and the pace is also really good. Writing quality is good and the grammar is consistent. I see the potential this novel has. Keep it up

SupremeDaoist2
SupremeDaoist2Lv3SupremeDaoist2

This a nice novel it really reminds about the good times. All in all great storyline wonderful startup. I know it has great potential. Good luck author

Reveries_
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the beginning is very good, it makes you want to read. The subject of the book is good but very short pages And it's quick, but I really like the topic and the writing style.

alu_sachi
alu_sachiLv12alu_sachi

The book has unlimited potential. can't stop reading

Maxemillian
MaxemillianLv2Maxemillian

the overall theme of the story is great and even with only 4 chapters out it has potential! The writing quality is unfortunately not that good but with rewrites/further chapters that will probably become better.

Dizsce
DizsceLv4Dizsce

The synopsis really caught my attention. Just need to clarify some things in the story. There was this instance that I couldn't follow certain conversations. I'll wait for more chapters and I'll make a review agqin.

Kim_Diok
Kim_DiokLv2Kim_Diok

The story plot is good. The story is like a secret diary of individuals that sometimes it's hard to reveal. I believe there is more to look forward on this story.

HeartzDiary
HeartzDiaryAutorHeartzDiary

love all the characters and mysteries are coming up

HeartzDiary
HeartzDiaryAutorHeartzDiary

lovely chapter please you all should vote, comment.

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